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facial recognition software. 7apa3
The lecturer contrasts with the ideas mentioned in the passage regarding the advantages of the facial recognition software. The passage decsribes the variety of features of the software and proves it to be very useful for identifying the criminals. However, the professor differs from the usefulness of the software rather she outlines all the points which prove the software to be inaccurate. First of all, the lecturer states about the failure of the system upto 39% to identify the faces during the Super Bowl 2011. She further explains that the failure is due to the privacy and libert. . .
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mentioned in the passage regarding the advantages of the facial recognition
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software
and proves it to be
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useful for identifying the criminals.
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rather
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IELTS essay facial recognition software.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
100 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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