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f dcnnkl nad dadvm, mfnv nlvzbvfnmklsc; x, z hdcskmlc sjchchvnnsmsnvnnv chhhdndnns cjcjdjjckfhhf cjfjfjnskjc lcc chdhsla cjjs jd, ajjjcnnnd jdjjkj kemE8
In this modern era, due to the high population, there is tremendous pick up in transportation in urban areas around the world, in regards it is undoubtedly the case that cities and towns increasingly suffer from the high volume of traffic congestion. I will examine the reasons for this trend and suggest some practical policies the authorities could implement to reduce the level of traffic in our cities. To begin with, the first step is to understand why traffic has increased in towns and cities. Broadly speaking, as the population growth in many metropolis cities such as Shanghai, New York, Dhaka and Bangkok has increased rapidly in the past recent years, it means that there are more cars in the city. Secondly, in some cities such as Manila, public transportation facilities are poorly managed. Therefore, people choose to drive their own vehicles. Lastly, in many countries such as Indonesia or China, economic development is not widespread, and as a result, a lot of people from rural areas move to cities which would create traffic-related problems. The number of commuters in many cities has increased dramatically but in proportion, the total number of roads remained almost the same as it was in the past. Many people are buying private cars and it is not unusual that many families own more than one car. These two reasons with poor traffic management systems in many cities cause unmanageable traffic jams nowadays. However, there are several things the government and public should be pragmatic about the actions that will solve this issue. The government should encourage using public transport instead of personal vehicles because in many countries one will hardly find a co-passenger in a car other than the driver. In addition, the traffic control department should implement stringent traffic rules, for instance, diverting traffic in peak hours on a particular avenue. In Conclusion, a rapid rise in car users is one of the major reasons for increasingly pathetic congestion. The government and public should cooperate to reduce the number of vehicles by using public transport.
In this modern era, due to the high population, there is tremendous pick up in transportation in urban areas around the world, in regards it is
undoubtedly
the case that
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cities
and towns
increasingly
suffer from the high volume of
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traffic
congestion. I will examine the reasons for this trend and suggest
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some
practical policies the authorities could implement to
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reduce
the level of
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traffic
in our cities.

To
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begin
with, the
first
step is to understand why
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traffic
has increased in towns and
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cities
.
Broadly
speaking, as the population growth in
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many
metropolis
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cities
such as Shanghai, New York, Dhaka and Bangkok has increased
rapidly
in the past recent years, it means that there are more
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cars
in the city.
Secondly
, in
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some
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cities
such as Manila,
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public
transportation facilities are
poorly
managed.
Therefore
,
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people
choose to drive their
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own
vehicles.
Lastly
, in
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many
countries such as Indonesia or China, economic development is not widespread, and
as a result
,
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a lot of
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people
from rural areas
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move
to
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cities
which would create traffic-related problems. The number of commuters in
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many
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cities
has increased
dramatically
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but
in proportion, the total number of roads remained almost the same as it was in the past.
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Many
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people
are buying private
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cars
and it is not unusual that
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many
families
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own
more than one
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car
. These two reasons with poor
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traffic
management systems in
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many
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cities
cause unmanageable
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traffic
jams nowadays.

However
, there are several things the
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government
and
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public
should be pragmatic about the actions that will solve this issue. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should encourage using
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public
transport
instead
of personal vehicles
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because
in
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many
countries one will hardly find a co-passenger in a
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car
other than the driver.
In addition
, the
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traffic
control department should implement stringent
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traffic
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rules
,
for instance
, diverting
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traffic
in peak hours on a particular avenue.

In Conclusion
, a rapid rise in
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car
users is one of the major reasons for
increasingly
pathetic congestion. The
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government
and
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public
should cooperate to
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reduce
the number of vehicles by using
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public
transport.
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IELTS essay f dcnnkl nad dadvm, mfnv nlvzbvfnmklsc; x, z hdcskmlc sjchchvnnsmsnvnnv chhhdndnns cjcjdjjckfhhf cjfjfjnskjc lcc chdhsla cjjs jd, ajjjcnnnd jdjjkj

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342 words
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