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Dear prof. Ackermann, I am very keen to do my PhD under your skilled supervision at the University of Gottingen, and I have strong enthusiasm to become one of your research group members, and I feel that I have the necessary qualifications and abilities to join your group. Your publications in the field of organic synthesis, with a specific focus on C-H, and C-C activation, were so exciting to me. I have studied some of your articles and was very impressed by the way you utilized various methods and alternative catalysts for C-C, and C-H alkylation. In one of your articles, you mentioned the use of manganese, as a less toxic catalyst, for C-H activation in indole toward peptide synthesizing. This method had functional group tolerance, and also was in good to excellent yield. In another report, you used rhodium as a catalyst for electro-oxidative C-C alkylation, and introduced the first electro-chemical C-C activation by using electricity, via a greener way due to the fact that it was oxidant-free. As a result, studying your research works motivated me to try joining your research lab. I was extremely interested in synthesis, especially synthesizing bioactive compounds. Therefore, I chose medicinal chemistry as my field of study. Throughout bachelor, I was the top student in organic chemistry courses. To pass my master’s internship course, I worked under supervision of Dr. Majid Hamzeloo in chemistry physics lab, University of Tehran. The main topic of my research was the study of physio-chemical properties of several drugs to increase their absorption time. This limited research gave me the opportunity to push my knowledge boundaries further. My greater curiosity and interest in chemistry pushed me to pursue my education and led me to several achievements in my field of study. During my master, I had 5 lectures in the field of medicinal chemistry, biochemistry, and synthesis. My lectures in biochemistry were entitled “DNA Polymerase II” and “Antiviral Nucleoside analogues” and the other in the field of medicinal chemistry was about “Non-Alcoholic Fatty Liver disease “and introducing some common medicines for this prevalent disease. My master’s thesis was entitled “Synthesis of 2H-Azirines and their usage in designing of new reactions”. I tried several reactions with this highly potent ring, and I did never give up until getting an acceptable result. I synthesized 23 derivatives of my final product in a limited time. As you studied my research experience, I was also able to get an excellent response by using a totally different electrophile (Iodine), and I synthesized 5 derivatives of this target product within just one week. During my master thesis, I tried to focus on improving my skills in organic synthesis, and Joining Balalaie’s research group gave me the opportunity to gain communicative and teamwork skills as well as Specialized skills in synthesis, purification, and characterization of organic compounds. Finally, I hope you accept me as one of your group’s member to be able to play a crucial role in your research activities. I am so interested in working in an academic environment after finishing my PhD, and it is my honor to learn from you and accompany you in this area, and I believe that I am able to meet the challenges which I have prepared myself as well as I could. Sincerely, Reyhaneh Hosseinijei
Dear prof.
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Ackermann
,

I am
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very
keen to do my PhD under your skilled supervision at the University of
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Gottingen
, and I have strong enthusiasm to become one of your
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research
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group
members, and I feel that I have the necessary qualifications and abilities to
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join
your group.

Your publications in the
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field
of
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organic
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synthesis
, with a specific focus on C-H, and C-C activation, were
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so
exciting to me. I have studied
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some
of your articles and was
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very
impressed by the way you utilized various methods and alternative catalysts for C-C, and C-H
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alkylation
. In one of your articles, you mentioned the
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use
of manganese, as a less toxic catalyst, for C-H activation in
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indole
toward peptide synthesizing. This method had functional
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group
tolerance, and
also
was in
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good
to excellent yield. In another report, you
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used
rhodium as a catalyst for
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electro-oxidative
C-C
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alkylation
, and introduced the
first
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electro-chemical
C-C activation by using electricity, via a greener way due to the fact that it was oxidant-free.
As a result
, studying your
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research
works motivated me to try joining your
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research
lab.

I was
extremely
interested in
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synthesis
,
especially
synthesizing bioactive compounds.
Therefore
, I chose medicinal
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chemistry
as my
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field
of study. Throughout bachelor, I was the top student in
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organic
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chemistry
courses. To pass my
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master’s
internship course, I worked under supervision of Dr. Majid
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Hamzeloo
in
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chemistry
physics lab, University of Tehran. The main topic of my
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research
was the study of physio-chemical properties of several drugs to increase their absorption time. This limited
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
research
gave me the opportunity to push my knowledge boundaries
further
.

My greater curiosity and interest in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
chemistry
pushed me to pursue my education and led me to several achievements in my
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field
of study. During my
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master
, I had 5 lectures in the
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field
of medicinal
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chemistry
, biochemistry, and
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synthesis
. My lectures in biochemistry
were entitled
“DNA Polymerase II” and “Antiviral Nucleoside analogues” and the other in the
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field
of medicinal
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chemistry
was about “Non-Alcoholic Fatty Liver disease “and introducing
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some
common medicines for this prevalent disease. My
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master’s
thesis
was entitled
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“Synthesis
of 2H-Azirines and their usage in designing of new reactions”. I tried several reactions with this
highly
potent ring, and I did never give up until getting an acceptable result. I synthesized 23 derivatives of my final product in a limited time. As you studied my
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research
experience, I was
also
able to
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get
an excellent response by using a
totally
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different
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electrophile
(Iodine), and I synthesized 5 derivatives of this target product within
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just
one week. During my
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master
thesis, I tried to focus on improving my
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skills
in
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organic
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synthesis
, and Joining
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Balalaie
’s
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research
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group
gave me the opportunity to gain communicative and teamwork
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skills
as well
as Specialized
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skills
in
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synthesis
, purification, and characterization of
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organic
compounds.

Finally
, I hope you accept me as one of your
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group’s
member to be able to play a crucial role in your
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research
activities. I am
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so
interested in working in an academic environment after finishing my PhD, and it is my honor to learn from you and accompany you in this area, and I believe that I am able to
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meet
the challenges which I have prepared myself
as well
as I could.

Sincerely
,

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Reyhaneh
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Hosseinijei
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