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SOME PREFER TRAVELLING WITH COMPANION OTHER PREFER TO TRAVEL ALONE. WHICH DO YOU THINK IS BETTER?

SOME PREFER TRAVELLING WITH COMPANION OTHER PREFER TO TRAVEL ALONE. WHICH DO YOU THINK IS BETTER? 0alLB
MANY PEOPLE LIKE TO TRAVEL, THEY WANT TO EXPLOR IN OUR LIVING NATURE AND PLACES. THEY WANT TO GO IN DIFFERENT PLACES LIKE BEACH, MOUNTAIN AND HISTORICAL PLACES. THEY ENJOY WHEN THEY ARE TRAVELLING. THEY SPENT A MONEY JUST TO TRAVEL AND SEE THE BEAUTIFUL PLACES ON EART. MOST OF THEM ARE TRAVELLING WITH THEIR GROUPS DUE TO THE FACT THAT BRINGS HAPPIER WHEN THEY TRAVELLING WITH YOUR COMPANIONS. THEY GIVE CHANGED OF WORDS WHILE IN TRAVELLING, WHAT THEIR SEE IN PLACE WHERE THEY GO, THEY GIVE SOME OPINION. IF THERE IS A PROBLEM WHILE IN TRAVELLING THEY HELP EACH OTHER, SO THAT THEY CAN FIX THE PROBLEM. IN ADDITION, SOME PEOPLE WANT TO TRAVEL ALONE BECAUSE THEY WANT PEACE OF MIND. THEY WANT TO BE ALONE JUST TO HAVE A BREAK FROM A TOXIC PEOPLE WHO DESTROY THERE DAY. WHEN THEY TRAVELLING ALONE THEIR FEELING ARE SO HAPPY DUE TO THE FACT THEY HAD A BREAK. IN MY OPINION, I THINK I WILL GO IT WITH MY COMPANIONS IT IS SO MUCH FUN WITH YOUR GROUP OR WORKMATES. THEY WILL PUT UP A GAME AND YOUR GROUP WILL BE PARTICAPATED. WE WILL EAT AND DRINK AN ALCOHOLIC DRINK TOGETHER AND CHANGING OF WORDS. THEY HAD GROUP PICTURE THAT BRINGS GOOD MEMORIES WHILE IN TRAVEL. MUCH HAPPIER FOR ME WHEN I TRAVEL WITH MY COMPANIONS.
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LIKE TO
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TRAVEL
, THEY
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EXPLOR
IN OUR LIVING NATURE AND
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PLACES
. THEY
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WANT
TO GO IN
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DIFFERENT
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PLACES
LIKE BEACH, MOUNTAIN AND HISTORICAL
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PLACES
. THEY ENJOY WHEN THEY ARE
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TRAVELLING
.
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THEY
SPENT
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A MONEY
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JUST
TO
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TRAVEL
AND
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SEE
THE
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BEAUTIFUL
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PLACES
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ON EART
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MOST OF THEM ARE
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TRAVELLING
WITH THEIR
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GROUPS
DUE TO THE FACT THAT BRINGS HAPPIER WHEN THEY
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TRAVELLING
WITH YOUR COMPANIONS. THEY GIVE
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CHANGED
OF WORDS WHILE IN
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TRAVELLING
, WHAT THEIR
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SEE
IN
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PLACE
WHERE THEY GO, THEY GIVE
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SOME
OPINION. IF THERE IS A PROBLEM WHILE IN
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TRAVELLING
THEY
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HELP
EACH OTHER,
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SO
THAT THEY CAN
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FIX
THE PROBLEM.

IN ADDITION
,
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SOME
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PEOPLE
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WANT
TO
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TRAVEL
ALONE
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BECAUSE
THEY
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WANT
PEACE OF MIND. THEY
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TO BE ALONE
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TO HAVE A BREAK FROM A TOXIC
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PEOPLE
WHO
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DESTROY
THERE DAY. WHEN THEY
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TRAVELLING
ALONE THEIR FEELING ARE
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SO
HAPPY DUE TO THE FACT THEY HAD A BREAK.

IN MY OPINION, I
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THINK
I WILL GO IT WITH MY COMPANIONS IT IS
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SO
MUCH FUN WITH YOUR
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GROUP
OR WORKMATES. THEY WILL PUT UP A GAME AND YOUR
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GROUP
WILL BE
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PARTICAPATED
. WE WILL EAT AND DRINK AN ALCOHOLIC DRINK TOGETHER AND CHANGING OF WORDS. THEY HAD
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GROUP
PICTURE THAT BRINGS
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GOOD
MEMORIES WHILE IN
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TRAVEL
. MUCH HAPPIER FOR ME WHEN I
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TRAVEL
WITH MY COMPANIONS.
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IELTS essay SOME PREFER TRAVELLING WITH COMPANION OTHER PREFER TO TRAVEL ALONE. WHICH DO YOU THINK IS BETTER?

Essay
  American English
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225 words
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