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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do? j0kd
People are having harmful effects on the environment these days. However, there are various steps could be taken to reduce the damage that human are doing to our world. The main problem threating to the environment are pollution and waste. Water pollution, for example, can have many different causes. Factories dump industrial waste into lakes and rivers. Farms using pesticides to kill insects and herbicides to kill weeds also lead to water pollution. Therefore, there are frequent outbreaks of cholera and other diseases because of people drinking untreated water. On the one hand, there are still some measures to stop these problems. Firstly, goverments could fine group which having activities harming to the environment and human life. Secondly, they could put lessons about how people treat the environment now into study program so that students can act harmlessly to where they live on. On the other hand, individuals should also take responsibility for the efectts they do to the environment. We can save the water as much as possible, grow more trees and take part in protecting envirentment activities held by groups. Using private transport is also a good way to reduce air pollution. In conclusion, goverments and individuals must know the impact they have on the environment.
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People
are having harmful effects on the
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environment
these days.
However
, there are various steps could
be taken
to
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reduce
the damage
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that human are
doing to our world.

The main problem
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threating
to the
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environment
are pollution and waste. Water pollution,
for example
, can have
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many
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different
causes. Factories dump industrial waste into lakes and rivers. Farms using pesticides to kill insects and herbicides to kill weeds
also
lead to water pollution.
Therefore
, there are frequent outbreaks of cholera and other diseases
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because
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
drinking untreated water.

On the one hand, there are
still
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some
measures to
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stop
these problems.
Firstly
,
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goverments
could fine group which having activities harming to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
and human life.
Secondly
, they could put lessons about how
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
treat the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
into study program
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so
that students can act
harmlessly
to where they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
on.

On the other hand
, individuals should
also
take responsibility for the
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efectts
they do to the
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environment
. We can save the water as much as possible, grow more trees and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in protecting
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envirentment
activities held by groups. Using private transport is
also
a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
air pollution.

In conclusion
,
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goverments
and individuals
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must
know the impact they have on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
.
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IELTS essay Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

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5 paragraphs
208 words
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