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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What are the problems and solutions?

It is an ongoing debate that the environment is affected badly because of the activities of human beings. This essay will discuss the problems created by humans; also, the measures that they can take to overcome this devastating issue. Deforestation and water pollution are two major types of threats to the environment. Due to the increasing number of populations on planet, the need of cutting down the forests are increasing rapidly, which have a detrimental effect on animals in forest. Many animals are losing their habitats and leads to the verge of extinction. As the industries increases, they are throwing their garbage near the river, which is then reached to the seabed, through water waves. It has a worst effect on marine animals and aquatic plants, they are also becoming extinct. Humans should take responsibility to overcome these issues. They can make apartments, one over another, instead of separate houses, so that increasing number of populations could be managed. They can also apply One Child Policy just like China to overcome population growth. Moreover, they can dispose of industries waste properly at a proper place. Other countries have made strict policies upon disposal of waste material of industries; our government could also develop some policies to reduce industrial waste in oceans. In this way, we can save our environment and animal species. In conclusion, humans must play their part in looking after the animal’s habitat and to protect their species specially which are close to the extinction by protecting the environment.

It is an ongoing debate that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
badly
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because
 of the activities of human beings. This essay will discuss the problems created by humans; also
, the measures that they can take to overcome this devastating issue.

Deforestation and water pollution are two major types of threats to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
. Due to the increasing number of populations on planet, the need of cutting down the forests are increasing rapidly
, which have a detrimental effect on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
 in forest. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
 are losing their habitats and leads to the verge of extinction. As the industries increases, they are throwing their garbage near the river, which is then reached to the seabed, through water waves. It has Use “the” with the superlative.the
a
 worst effect on marine You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpetbeastcreature
animals
 and aquatic plants, they are also
 becoming extinct.

Humans should take responsibility to overcome these issues. They can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 apartments, one over another, instead
 of separate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that increasing number of populations could be managed
. They can also
 apply One Child Policy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 like China to overcome population growth. Moreover
, they can dispose of industries waste properly
 at a proper place. Other countries have made strict policies upon disposal of waste material of industries; our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 could also
 develop This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 policies to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 industrial waste in oceans. In this way, we can save our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnaturalbodily
animal
 species.

In conclusion
, humans This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 play their part in looking after the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnaturalbodily
animal’s
 habitat and to protect their species specially
 which are close to the extinction by protecting the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstatusclimatehabitatsurroundingssettingsituation
environment
. 