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Experts said that the gold price

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Experts said that the gold price last week continuously increased and decreased, but within a narrow range after conflicting information from the US Federal Reserve (Fed). Concerns about high inflation that led the Fed to tighten monetary policy gradually eased when the personal consumption expenditures (PCE) price index announced the last session of the week increased less than expectedExperts said that the gold price
Experts said that the gold price last week
continuously
increased and decreased,
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within a narrow range after conflicting information from the US Federal Reserve (Fed). Concerns about high inflation that led the Fed to tighten monetary policy
gradually
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eased
when the personal consumption expenditures (PCE) price index announced the last session of the week increased less than
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said that the gold
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IELTS essay Experts said that the gold price

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
63 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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