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EXERCISE IS AN IMPORTANT PART OF A HEALTHY LIFE

EXERCISE IS AN IMPORTANT PART OF A HEALTHY LIFE NM9N0

Exercise is an important part of a healthy life. If people don't exercise, they will become unhealthy. Nowadays, many people don't get enough exercise because they have jobs where they sit down all day. Additionally, life is easier. In the old days, people had to wash clothes by hand or make their own bread. Result, they were more active in their lives. Also, people didn't have cars in the old days, because they had to walk everywhere. This meant that people were active in their daily life. Now, due cars and machines which make life easier, people don't do as much. As a result, they become more unfit.

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