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exchange programs would help all adolescent school pupils greatly.

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Some teachers feel that overseas exchange programs would help all adolescent school pupils greatly. Despite certain disadvantages, I believe the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. On the one hand, there are a number of significant drawbacks for young students who choose to participate in overseas exchange programs. The first disadvantage is cultural shock. Exchange students may encounter unusual habits and beliefs, which can easily lead to misunderstanding, stress, and conflict. When students are having to adjust to a new culture, it may be difficult for them to focus totally on their academics. Another downside is that many students are unable to complete their foreign learning programs, resulting in poor academic. However, the benefits that such programs provide to kids much outweigh the downsides. For starters, exchange students get the opportunity to meet individuals from all over the world and learn a variety of skills that they would not have had the opportunity to master if they were studying in their native country. They can, for example, improve their social skills by discussing their experiences with other exchange students and get a deeper understanding of the culture by involving themselves in the local community. Another advantage is that living in a different country allows exchange students to become more self-sufficient. This is because, in the absence of everyday parental care, teenagers must learn to cook, clean, manage their funds, and make their own decisions. In conclusion, while exchange students may have challenges in adjusting to a new culture and keeping to foreign public schools
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students
who choose to participate in overseas
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exchange
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. The
first
disadvantage is cultural shock.
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students
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, and conflict. When
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are having to adjust to a new culture, it may be difficult for them to focus
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many
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are unable to complete their foreign learning
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, resulting in poor academic.

However
, the benefits that such
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provide to kids much outweigh the downsides. For starters,
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the opportunity to
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individuals from all over the world and learn a variety of
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that they would not have had the opportunity to master if they were studying in their native country. They can,
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different
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may have challenges in adjusting to a new culture and keeping to foreign public schools
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IELTS essay exchange programs would help all adolescent school pupils greatly.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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