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Some people believe that teaching is only a matter of delivering lessons and testing students. However, throughout my career as an English teacher, I have shown valuable skills that aided me to do my job and increase my influence over my students and community. In 2017, I heard that a friend of mine and some of his friends in the 4th year in the English Department had difficulty passing the “Modern Prose” module, and they needed to pass that module to graduate. At that time, Syrian students were suffering at all levels, especially economically, and most of them could not afford to take private lessons. Being a graduate from the English department myself, I started an initiative to help those students. I gathered a team of top graduates to help me. As a team leader, I demonstrated good communication skills with other team members, and after discussing with them, I set up a strategy to follow. I also empowered the less experienced partners who were shy to speak in English in front of other people. When the time came, 13 students joined our sessions, so I scheduled three meetings a week for one month. The session lasted for 2 hours. In the beginning, I started by initiating discussions about the two assigned literary works for that module; “Heart of Darkness” by Joseph Conrad and “Mrs. Dalloway” by Virginia Woolf. After that, in each session, I chose some passages from the literary works and asked them to comment on them. Then, each team member would evaluate two students highlighting the key ideas they had to mention. Then I brought some previous exam questions and focused their attention on how to answer them in the form of academic essays. Within two weeks, the students showed considerable progress, which made me and my team members delighted. Eventually, the initiative succeeded in achieving its aim as 11 students managed to pass that module and graduated from the English department. In September 2019, I started working at the French School in Erbil, Iraq, as a primary English teacher. The challenge of that context was that students were of different backgrounds and mixed-abilities. I tried my best to find a suitable solution. First, I did a Needs Analysis for the students to know their weaknesses, their preferred learning styles, and what they enjoy most in the class. With such kind of Needs Analysis, I managed to understand my students, their personalities, and how they like to learn. Second, I applied a variety of teaching methods such as pair-work, group-work, miming, and repetitions to reinforce their learning. Third, when I noticed that some of them were shy to speak English because they were afraid to make mistakes, I explained that errors are part of learning, and we need to make mistakes to learn. That resulted in supporting their self-confidence and increasing their motivation. Consequently, they passed their exams with good grades. Hence, diagnosing the problems and making the right decisions have helped me to succeed in this challenge. In 2016 I decided to employ my skills as an English teacher to serve my community, so I volunteered in Syria Trust for Development, a branch of Latakia. My duty was to give free English lessons for the displaced Syrian children, who were obliged to skip school for a long time due to the damage that has taken place in their cities. The complexity of that task was that students were of different ages and mixed-abilities. Such a situation would be problematic for any teacher, yet I tried my best to find a suitable solution. First, I divided the students into groups according to their level, not age in that sense, some of them were ten years old, but they were still in the 2nd grade. Second, I applied a variety of teaching methods and techniques such as miming, repetitions, and drawing to reinforce their learning. Moreover, I made use of videos and songs to engage students and motivate them. Although the beginning was difficult, after six months of hard work, the 2nd graders managed to pass the exam and moved to the 3rd grade. For the others, 80% of them succeeded by the end of the year and could move to the upper class. Hence, I believe that I supported those learners in establishing their basics in the English language, and to some extent bridging the gap between their age and their level of English. Eventually, many of them were able to continue their education at schools after they went back to their cities.
Some
people
believe that teaching is
only
a matter of delivering lessons and testing
students
.
However
, throughout my career as an English
teacher
, I have shown valuable
skills
that aided me to do my job and increase my influence over my
students
and community.

In 2017, I heard that a friend of mine and
some
of his friends in the 4th year in the English Department had difficulty passing the “Modern Prose”
module
, and they needed to pass that
module
to graduate. At that time, Syrian
students
were suffering at all levels,
especially
economically
, and most of them could not afford to take private lessons. Being a graduate from the English department myself, I
started
an initiative to
help
those
students
. I gathered a
team
of top graduates to
help
me. As a
team
leader, I demonstrated
good
communication
skills
with other
team
members, and after discussing with them, I set up a strategy to follow. I
also
empowered the less experienced partners who were shy to speak in English in front of other
people
. When the time came, 13
students
joined
our sessions,
so
I scheduled three meetings a week for one month. The session lasted for 2 hours. In the beginning, I
started
by initiating discussions about the two assigned literary works for that
module
; “Heart of Darkness” by Joseph Conrad and “Mrs.
Dalloway
” by Virginia Woolf. After that, in each session, I chose
some
passages from the literary works and asked them to comment on them. Then, each
team
member would evaluate two
students
highlighting the key
ideas
they had to mention. Then I brought
some
previous exam questions and focused their attention on how to answer them in the form of academic essays. Within two weeks, the
students
showed
considerable progress, which made me and my
team
members delighted.
Eventually
, the initiative succeeded in achieving its aim as 11
students
managed to pass that
module
and graduated from the English department.

In September 2019, I
started
working at the French School in
Erbil
, Iraq, as a primary English
teacher
. The challenge of that context was that
students
were of
different
backgrounds and mixed-abilities. I tried my best to find a suitable solution.
First
, I did a Needs Analysis for the
students
to know their weaknesses, their preferred
learning
styles, and what they enjoy most in the
class
. With such kind of Needs Analysis, I managed to understand my
students
, their personalities, and how they like to learn. Second, I applied a variety of teaching methods such as pair-work, group-work, miming, and repetitions to reinforce their
learning
. Third, when I noticed that
some
of them were shy to speak English
because
they were afraid to
make
mistakes, I
explained
that errors are part of
learning
, and we need to
make
mistakes to learn. That resulted in supporting their self-confidence and increasing their motivation.
Consequently
, they passed their exams with
good
grades.
Hence
, diagnosing the problems and making the right decisions have
helped
me to succeed in this challenge.

In
2016 I
decided to employ my
skills
as an English
teacher
to serve my community,
so
I volunteered in Syria Trust for Development, a branch of
Latakia
. My duty was to give free English lessons for the displaced Syrian children, who
were obliged
to skip school for a long time due to the damage that has taken place in their cities. The complexity of that task was that
students
were of
different
ages and mixed-abilities. Such a situation would be problematic for any
teacher
,
yet
I tried my best to find a suitable solution.
First
, I divided the
students
into groups according to their level, not age in that sense,
some
of them were ten years
old
,
but
they were
still
in the 2nd grade. Second, I applied a variety of teaching methods and techniques such as miming, repetitions, and drawing to reinforce their
learning
.
Moreover
, I made
use
of videos and songs to engage
students
and motivate them. Although the beginning was difficult, after six months of
hard
work, the 2nd graders managed to pass the exam and
moved
to the 3rd grade. For the others, 80% of them succeeded by the
end
of the year and could
move
to the upper
class
.

Hence
, I believe that I supported those learners in establishing their basics in the English language, and to
some
extent bridging the gap between their age and their level of English.
Eventually
,
many
of them were able to continue their education at schools after they went back to their cities.
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IELTS essay Examples of my leadership features

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
756 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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