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Example 4. According to many people, Social Networking sites have had a great negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Social media and networking sites have become an inseparable part of the lives of the present generation. However, many people strongly believe that such networking has a detrimental effect on the people’s lives. This essay will discuss that media and technology are mainly advantageous to the people but their damaging repercussions on the society can also not be overlooked, thus partially agreeing with the statement. To commence with the discussion, the impact of social media has some outstanding benefits. Firstly, the world has become a global village because of these sites. People from different corners have come closer through websites like Facebook, Twitter, LinkedIn and Instagram. Secondly, these sites offer individuals a chance to interact with people who share common interests. In this regard, social networking has indeed proved to be a boon. Thirdly, social net working has not only broadened the mental horizon of the users in terms of knowledge, but has also enhanced the scope of business opportunities. On the flip side, the social networking also has some adverse effects. Instead of taking interest in the community activities, people today prefer to create online contacts. Consequently, they fail to form close personal relationships. Face book marriages are also being fixed though they are not proving to be very successful. Apart from this, the society is becoming increasingly broken, fragmented and isolated. People tend to spend more time in fiddling with their gadgets rather than passing time with their families. To conclude, while individuals have greater opportunities of developing online friendships through social media, these relations lack the real bonding and encourage seclusion. The community life is being unfavorably impacted. People must participate in community activities to promote harmony among the individuals for a healthy society.

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Social
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media
 and networking sites have become an inseparable part of

the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 of the present generation. However
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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people
strongly
 believe that

such networking has a detrimental effect on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people’s
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lives
. This essay will

discuss that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewstelevisionradiopublishing
media
 and technology are mainly
 advantageous to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
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but


their damaging repercussions on the society can also
 not be overlooked
, thus


partially
 agreeing with the statement.

To commence with the discussion, the impact of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcivilcommunal
social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewstelevisionradiopublishing
media
 has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 outstanding

benefits. Firstly
, the world has become a global village This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of these sites.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 corners have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 closer through websites like Facebook,

Twitter, LinkedIn and Instagram. Secondly
, these sites offer individuals a chance

to interact with You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 who share common interests. In this regard, social

networking has indeed
 proved to be a boon. Thirdly
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcivilcommunal
social
 net working has not

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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but
 has

also
 enhanced the scope of business opportunities.

On the flip side, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcivilcommunal
social
 networking also
 has This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 adverse effects. Instead
 of

taking interest in the community activities, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 prefer to create online

contacts. Consequently
, they fail to form close personal relationships. Face book

marriages are also
 being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 though they are not proving to be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 successful.

Apart from this, the society is becoming increasingly
 broken, fragmented and

isolated. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
People
 tend to spend more time in fiddling with their gadgets rather


than passing time with their families.

To conclude
, while individuals have greater opportunities of developing online

friendships through You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcivilcommunal
social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewstelevisionradiopublishing
media
, these relations lack the real bonding and

encourage seclusion. The community life is being unfavorably
 impacted. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People


This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 participate in community activities to promote harmony among the

individuals for a healthy society. 