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Examine the report of personal growth and come to an conclusion on this thought.

Examine the report of personal growth and come to an conclusion on this thought. 9LwKr
Introduction In earlier days I wanted to become a computerized game developer, but with the passage of time my priorities changed and now I made my final judgment to become a UX/UI designer. There is a plethora of reasons why I am excited and interested in this field. First reason is that I plan to follow in the footsteps of my cousin. I just love his work; for instance, not reporting to anyone and working freelance, handling many projects at the same time. At the earlier stage of Life “Step out of your comfort zone, or situations will force you to come out”. As a kid, I was not aware of my prospective plans, always playing games, getting poor marks, hanging out with friends and even worse I started failing in exams. In other words I was going with the flow in my comfort zone. As soon I started realising things that I have to do something before things fall out of hand. Hence I joined the engineering school to pursue my goal of becoming a computerized game developer. Learning Curve At this stage, I was a mature man worried about his future, graduated in computer science and looking for a profession. Fortunately, one of my best friends offered me a job of junior web developer in a well reputed company. Every day I learned new things and realised that industrial jobs are way more advanced than the study I have done. To make games I have to learn more coding languages and some 3D animation softwares. I was confused and did not know what to do. Along with this my seniors were happy with my work and decided to give me an entire project. I do not know why, but I started enjoying myself while in the research and design phase of the project and I gave my best to that project. Life changing decision for future Everything happens for a reason, due to some critical reasons I have quit my job. I was worried about my future and had a decision with my father. He guided me to study further abroad, this will give me an interval from hectic job life and help me focus on my career. Thus, I made a decision to take a design course because I started enjoying the research and design phase of product and Canada is known for the best education and this led me to take admission in Interactive media management in Conestoga College. Current Status Currently, I am a student of Interaction design course in Conestoga College, Kitchener, Ontario. I also have a CO-OP with Life Recovery Program based in Waterloo, Ontario. I feel like I love my life more than ever, I am most pleased creating new products based on research, interviews and surveys. My this decision extracted my best and I hope it will help in my forthcoming. eventual Goals “ Always set higher Goals ”. My current goal is to get a UX/UI designer job in a Multinational company with a minimum $50, 000 package. According to me, the UX/UI field is an ocean for learning and I have to do my best to stand out in this industry. To make my portfolio better I am planning a Project management course as well. As we all know companies always look for something extra and UX/Ui designer with Project Management skills is a better combination. To Conclude “We never know what future holds, but hard work should continue”. I wanted to become a game developer but i never really enjoyed that, now I find out a direction to my life as UX/UI designer.
Introduction

In earlier days I wanted to become a computerized game developer,
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but
with the passage of time my priorities
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changed
and
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now
I made my final judgment to become a UX/UI
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designer
. There is a plethora of
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reasons
why I
am excited
and interested in this field.
First
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reason
is that I plan to follow in the footsteps of my cousin. I
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just
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love
his work;
for instance
, not reporting to anyone and working freelance, handling
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many
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projects
at the same time.

At the earlier stage of Life

“Step out of your comfort zone, or situations will force you to
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come
out”. As a kid, I was not aware of my prospective plans, always playing
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games
, getting poor marks, hanging out with friends and even worse I
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started
failing in exams.
In other words
I was going with the flow in my comfort zone. As
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soon
I
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started
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realising
things that I
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have to
do something
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before
things fall out of hand.
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Hence
I
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joined
the engineering school to pursue my
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goal
of becoming a computerized game developer.

Learning Curve

At this stage, I was a mature
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man
worried about his future, graduated in computer science and looking for a profession.
Fortunately
, one of my
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best
friends offered me a
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job
of junior web developer in a well reputed
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company
. Every day I learned new things and
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realised
that industrial
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jobs
are way more advanced than the study I have done. To
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make
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games
I
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have to
learn more coding languages and
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some
3D animation
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softwares
. I
was confused
and did not
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know
what to do. Along with this my seniors were happy with my work and decided to give me an entire
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project
. I do not
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know
why,
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but
I
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started
enjoying myself while in the research and
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design
phase of the
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project
and I gave my
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best
to that project.

Life changing
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decision
for future

Everything happens for a
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reason
, due to
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some
critical
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reasons
I have quit my
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job
. I
was worried
about my future and had a
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decision
with my father. He guided me to study
further
abroad, this will give me an interval from hectic
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job
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life
and
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help
me focus on my career.
Thus
, I made a
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decision
to take a
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design
course
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because
I
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started
enjoying the research and
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design
phase of product and Canada
is known
for the
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best
education and this led me to take admission in Interactive media management in Conestoga College.

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Current
Status

Currently
, I am a student of Interaction
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design
course in Conestoga College, Kitchener, Ontario. I
also
have a CO-OP with
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Life
Recovery Program based in Waterloo, Ontario. I feel like I
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love
my
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life
more than ever, I am most
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pleased
creating new products based on research, interviews and surveys. My this
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decision
extracted my
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best
and I hope it will
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help
in my forthcoming.

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eventual
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Goals “
Always set higher
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Goals
”. My
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current
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goal
is to
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get
a UX/UI
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designer
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job
in a Multinational
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company
with a minimum $50, 000 package.
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According to me
, the UX/UI field is an ocean for learning and I
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have to
do my
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best
to stand out in this industry. To
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make
my portfolio better I am planning a
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Project
management course
as well
. As we all
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know
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companies
always look for something extra and UX/
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Ui
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designer
with
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Management
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skills
is a better combination.

To Conclude


“We never
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know
what future holds,
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but
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hard
work should continue”. I wanted to become a game developer
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but
i never
really
enjoyed that,
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now
I find out a direction to my
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life
as UX/UI
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designer
.
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IELTS essay Examine the report of personal growth and come to an conclusion on this thought.

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
605 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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