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Everyone has the rights to speak about their concern, as the same ways writer describe that, printed media is the correct path to access the information, while other believes that internet or online media is the finest medium.

Everyone has the rights to speak about their concern, as the same ways writer describe that, printed media is the correct path to access the information, while other believes that internet or online media is the finest medium. GOwL
Everyone has the rights to speak about their concern, as the same ways writer describe that, printed media is the correct path to access the information, while other believes that internet or online media is the finest medium. Here, we will discuss both the way of broadcasting news along with their advantages. As we aware that, Hard version of the news had been available for more than 100 years ago and still it is running very comfortably in this world as people believe in it. Because many revels that it spreads more reliable and honest information to us which can be digest easily. For example, when we read any article in the newspaper, that contain all the information along with the writer's name which illustrates that, these newspaper company has well educated and experienced journalists to edit the news. as sometimes we get apology from the writer because of irrelevant or wrong information. Now it's time to discuss about the online media such as TV or Internet. I do believe that, these type of medium broadcast live and breaking news which helpful in our routine life. For instance, if you have prior information about the weather or any natural calamities then you can avoid to go there. Besides, if you have live sports channel then you get live score of your favorite sports like cricket or football etc. which keeps you updated. Moreover, such news required to spread fast so people get familiar with the information. In conclusion, Every coins has two sides and the same way, Newspaper or Online media has their own benefits and drawbacks and we have to decide how to use it as both the path are correct and informative.
Everyone has the rights to speak about their concern, as the same
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ways
writer
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describe
that, printed
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media
is the correct path to access the
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information
, while other believes that internet or online
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media
is the finest medium. Here, we will discuss both the way of broadcasting
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news
along with their advantages.

As
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we aware
that,
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Hard
version of the
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news
had been available for more than 100 years ago and
still
it is running
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very
comfortably
in this world as
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people
believe in it.
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Because
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many
revels that it spreads more reliable and honest
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information
to us which can be
Consider using a past participle here: "digested".
digest
easily
.
For example
, when we read any article in the newspaper, that contain all the
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information
along with the writer's name which illustrates that,
Did you mean "this newspaper" or "these newspapers"?
these newspaper
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company
has
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
well educated
and experienced journalists to edit the
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news
.
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as
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sometimes
we
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get
apology from the writer
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because
of irrelevant or
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wrong
information.

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Now
it's time to
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discuss about the
online
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media
such as TV or Internet. I do believe that, these type of medium broadcast
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live
and breaking
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news
which helpful in our routine life.
For instance
, if you have prior
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information
about the weather or any natural calamities then you can
The verb 'avoid' is used with the gerund form: "avoid going".
avoid to go
there.
Besides
, if you have
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live
sports channel then you
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get
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live
score of your favorite sports like cricket or football etc. which
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keeps
you updated.
Moreover
, such
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news
required to spread
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fast
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so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
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get
familiar with the information.

In conclusion
, Every
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coins
has two sides and the same way, Newspaper or Online
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media
has their
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own
benefits and
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drawbacks and
we
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have to
decide how to
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use
it as both the path are correct and informative.
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IELTS essay Everyone has the rights to speak about their concern, as the same ways writer describe that, printed media is the correct path to access the information, while other believes that internet or online media is the finest medium.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
284 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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