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Correct the six errors in the review QO81
I have been use these weights every day for the last three months, and I am very happy with them. Because they are made of steel, they are compact in comparison to plastic weights filled with sand. They are also less likely to break that the sand-filled ones. It´s very straightforward for change the weights. Also, the locks are very secure so you don´t must worry about the weights falling off. The only criticism I have is that don´t look very stylish. Overall I would definitely reccommend them them. They are perfect for beginner´s and professionals
I have been
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use
these
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weights
every day for the last three months, and I am
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very
happy with them.
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Because
they
are made
of steel, they are compact
in comparison
to plastic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weights
filled with sand. They are
also
less likely to break that the sand-filled ones.
You used an accent character instead of an apostrophe. Please use either "It's" or "It’s".
It´s
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very
straightforward for
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change
the
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weights
.
Also
, the locks are
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very
secure
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so
you
You used an accent character instead of an apostrophe. Please use either "don't" or "don’t".
don´t
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must
worry about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weights
falling off. The
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only
criticism I have is that
You used an accent character instead of an apostrophe. Please use either "don't" or "don’t".
don´t
look
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very
stylish.
Overall
I would definitely
Possible spelling mistake found.
reccommend
Possible typo: you repeated a word
them them
. They are perfect for
The character between 'beginner' and 's' is an accent character, not a standard apostrophe character. Use "beginner’s" (curly apostrophe) or "beginner's" (straight apostrophe).
beginner´s
and
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
professionals

IELTS essay Correct the six errors in the review

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
95 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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