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Everyone has different opinions about what makes someone a good parent. What are the qualities that you think are most necessary to be a good parent? Why are these qualities important? Discuss, giving examples.

Everyone has different opinions about what makes someone a good parent. What are the qualities that you think are most necessary to be a good parent? Why are these qualities important? Discuss, giving examples. oE2k3
In this day and age, parents shoulder a huge responsibility in raising children which is by no mean an easy task. I believe that there are several qualities the parents need to bring up their children well and this eassy will address reasons for my view as follow. There are two features the parents nedd to cultivate to take care of their kids effectively. The first way is that the parents should learn and understand actively knowledge about both physical and mental basic changes, difficulties the kids must face at different developtal stage as well as solution for such problems. For instance, by watching teaching children related programs on the television or websites, the parents could get beneficial information related to their children vaccinations common health problem and other different developmental issue. Creating a better connection between the kids and their parents ia also another important factor contributing to helping them bring up their kids successfully. If they may share and understand barriers their children encounter in both life and study, they will fell confident and make more effort to overcome these challenges. There are several reasons why the parents should do such activities described above. When knowing the kids’ diet, hygience and precautionary, it might help them to be cautious about and measure potential problems that can put their children’s life at risk. For example, if their kids accidentally cut finger himself or herself, thanks to basic medical training knowledge they could deal with such emergency situation more effectively. In the digital society, the parents are busy in heavy work loads thus they gradually ignore to their kids. This lack of parental love and care not only effect the children’s mental and healthy but also family bonding; therefore, sharing and understanding such feelings is also way help them become good parents. In conclusion, there are a number of qualities the parents need to practice to care children well such as learning knowledge about physical and mental, making interaction between kid and their parents. I personally believe that these play essential role in bringing up children.
In this day and age,
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parents
shoulder a huge responsibility in raising
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children
which is by no mean an easy task. I believe that there are several qualities the
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parents
need to bring up their
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children
well and this
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eassy
will address reasons for my view
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as follow
.

There are two features the
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parents
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nedd
to cultivate to take care of their
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kids
effectively
. The
first
way is that the
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parents
should learn and understand
actively
knowledge about both physical and mental basic
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changes
, difficulties the
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kids
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must
face at
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different
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developtal
stage
as well
as solution for such problems.
For instance
, by watching teaching
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children
related programs on the television or websites, the
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parents
could
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get
beneficial information related to their
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children
vaccinations common health problem and other
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different
developmental issue. Creating a better
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connection between
the
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kids
and their
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parents
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ia
also
another
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important
factor contributing to helping them bring up their
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kids
successfully
. If they may share and understand barriers their
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children
encounter in both life and study, they will
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fell
confident and
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make
more effort to overcome these challenges.

There are several reasons why the
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parents
should do such activities
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described
above. When knowing the
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kids’
diet,
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hygience
and precautionary, it might
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help
them to be cautious about and measure potential problems that can put their
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children’s
life at
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risk
.
For example
, if their
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kids
accidentally
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cut
finger himself or herself, thanks to basic medical training knowledge they could deal with such emergency situation more
effectively
. In the digital society, the
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parents
are busy in heavy work loads
thus
they
gradually
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ignore
to their
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kids
. This lack of parental
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love
and care not
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only
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effect
the
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children’s
mental and healthy
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but
also
family bonding;
therefore
, sharing and understanding such feelings is
also
way
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help
them become
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good
parents.

In conclusion
, there are a number of qualities the
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parents
need to practice to care
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children
well such as learning knowledge about physical and mental, making interaction between
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kid
and their
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parents
. I
personally
believe that these play essential role in bringing up
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children
.
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IELTS essay Everyone has different opinions about what makes someone a good parent. What are the qualities that you think are most necessary to be a good parent? Why are these qualities important? Discuss, giving examples.

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