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Everyday millions of tons of food is wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? How can this be solved? v.2

Everyday millions of tons of food is wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? How can this be solved? v. 2
Despite the fact that there are still some nations around the world that cannot afford to feed their citizens, there is a massive amount of food being wasted. In this essay, I will discuss some key reasons that are attributed to this problem and also suggest ways to address it. There are two primary culprits why food waste is pervasive on a global scale. Firstly, the lower price of food relative to income has been a significant driver of this problem. As a result of technological advances, namely the more efficient equipment, the cost of growing and manufacturing food products has become much cheaper in recent years and this has been passed on to the consumer. Secondly, it is common that many people often have a poor plan or even do not have one when buying and preserving food. It means supplies of food are acutely abundant, which does not motivate people to give careful consideration to how they buy and store their daily food requirements, especially in the case of fresh food. As a result, food is left idle, and eventually it rots and gets thrown away. Some measures can be taken to mitigate the problem. From the authorities’ perspective, they should raise awareness about wasting food. In other words, they need to promote public campaigns about the repercussions of food waste via a variety of channels, such as social media, newspapers, magazines and leaflets so that the community will feel more inclined to become food-conscious and avoid exacerbating the bad use of food. From a personal perspective, individuals and families should become more responsible for what they buy or eat on a daily basis. One way to do this is by making a list of materials and ingredients and checking it thoroughly before going to the market, and this will render the purchase of unnecessary food much less likely. In conclusion, food waste is generally caused by the low cost of food and the greater abundance of food compared to previous periods. However, governments and people can still do a lot in order to solve this problem, for example, individuals can prepare their lists of ingredients more carefully before going to the supermarket.
Despite the fact that there are
still
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some
nations around the world that cannot afford to feed their citizens, there is a massive amount of
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food
being wasted
. In this essay, I will discuss
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some
key reasons that
are attributed
to this
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problem
and
also
suggest ways to address it.

There are two primary culprits why
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food
waste is pervasive on a global scale.
Firstly
, the lower price of
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food
relative to income has been a significant driver of this
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problem
.
As a result
of technological advances,
namely
the more efficient equipment, the cost of growing and manufacturing
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food
products has become much cheaper in recent years and this has
been passed
on to the consumer.
Secondly
, it is common that
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many
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people
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often
have a poor plan or even do not have one when buying and preserving
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food
. It means supplies of
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food
are
acutely
abundant, which does not motivate
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people
to give careful consideration to how they
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buy
and store their daily
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food
requirements,
especially
in the case of fresh
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food
.
As a result
,
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food
is
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left
idle, and
eventually
it rots and
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gets
thrown away.

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Some
measures can
be taken
to mitigate the
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problem
. From the authorities’ perspective, they should raise awareness about wasting
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food
.
In other words
, they need to promote public campaigns about the repercussions of
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food
waste via a variety of channels, such as social media, newspapers, magazines and leaflets
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so
that the community will feel more inclined to become food-conscious and avoid exacerbating the
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bad
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use
of
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food
. From a personal perspective, individuals and families should become more responsible for what they
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buy
or eat on a
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daily


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basis
. One way to do this is by making a list of materials and ingredients and checking it
thoroughly
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before
going to the market, and this will render the
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purchase
of unnecessary
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food
much less likely.

In conclusion
,
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food
waste is
generally
caused by the low cost of
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food
and the greater abundance of
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food
compared to previous periods.
However
,
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governments
and
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people
can
still
do a lot in order to solve this
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problem
,
for example
, individuals can prepare their lists of ingredients more
carefully
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before
going to the supermarket.
17Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Everyday millions of tons of food is wasted all over the world. Why do you think this is happening? How can this be solved? v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
365 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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