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Everybody shoud donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity. How far do you share this viewpoint?

Everybody shoud donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity. How far do you share this viewpoint? WLVW
There are widely differing views on the issue of whether charity organization should be supported bt people wuth the same amount of money or not. While some people agree with this statement; I personally believe thet it is incorrect point due to the fact no everybody can afford them to pay for charities and philontropy is not just money. The reasons for my position are as follows. First of all, it is an indisputable fact that each person makes different incomes. While some people live on a grand scale with a good life condition, othess live just on a budget. As a result, some people san not give offering since their earnings are just enough for their expenditure. Secondly, it is my personal belief that charity is not just help with money because it is like volunteering. Therefore, people can help each other in different ways as selling old clothes or hand-making, being a part of charity run, donating blood or becoming organ donar. These all alternatives are also effective as donating money. By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that doing cgarity is good, however, not everybody can allow them to pay money, sometimes it can be some help to each other.
There are
widely
differing views on the issue of whether
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charity
organization should
be supported
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bt
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people
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wuth
the same amount of
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money
or not. While
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some
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people
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agree
with this statement; I
personally
believe
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thet it
is incorrect point due to the fact no everybody can afford them to pay for
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charities
and
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philontropy
is not
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just
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money
. The reasons for my position are as follows.

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, it is an indisputable fact that each person
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makes
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different
incomes. While
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some
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people
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live
on a grand scale with a
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good
life condition,
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othess
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live
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just
on a budget.
As a result
,
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some
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people
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san
not give offering since their earnings are
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just
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enough
for their expenditure.

Secondly
, it is my personal belief that
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charity
is not
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just
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help
with
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money
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because
it is like volunteering.
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,
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people
can
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help
each other in
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different
ways as selling
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old
clothes or hand-making, being a part of
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charity
run, donating blood or becoming organ
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donar
. These all alternatives are
also
effective as donating money.

By way of conclusion, I once again reaffirm my position that doing
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cgarity
is
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good
,
however
, not everybody can
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allow
them to pay
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money
,
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sometimes
it can be
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some
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help
to each other.
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IELTS essay Everybody shoud donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity. How far do you share this viewpoint?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
206 words
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