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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will...

Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will. . . JKQ36
It is true, annually some languages are getting disappear. However, for some experts, communication and life will become easy if there would be few languages. This essay agrees to some extent because it can be beneficial for countries and their businesses but this phenomenon can be an endanger for some cultures. On the one hand, as per few people opine life could be uncomplicated if there will be limited languages in the world, which is true up to an extent because this will be beneficial for business especially for them who want to do international trading. Generally, for business, the major obstacle is the language because an entrepreneur has to learn different languages to make their products available international market. In addition, it can also be helpful for students who want to do further studies in a foreign country. For instance, pupils have to give a test of a foreign language to study over there, it will become too easy for students if there will be limited languages in the world. On the other hand, if there will be limited languages then some cultures could be in danger. As we know, every community has their own mother tongue, which also represents its culture and tradition. Moreover, if the languages will be limited then the diversity of the community will also get an effect. India, for example, is well known for the several communities which have various languages and it is their unique identity. To conclude, language plays a vital role in easy understand. In my opinion, I agree to some extent that if there will be fewer languages then communication between two counties will become easy which can even help for business growth but somewhere it could affect the community's culture.
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annually
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some
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languages
are getting disappear.
However
, for
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some
experts, communication and life will become
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easy
if there would be few
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languages
. This essay
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agrees
to
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some
extent
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because
it can be beneficial for countries and their
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businesses
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but
this phenomenon can be
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some
cultures.

On the one hand, as per few
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people
opine life could
be uncomplicated
if there will be
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limited
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languages
in the world, which is true up to an extent
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because
this will be beneficial for
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business
especially
for them who want to do international trading.
Generally
, for
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business
, the major obstacle is the
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language
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because
an entrepreneur
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has to
learn
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different
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languages
to
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make
their products available international market.
In addition
, it can
also
be helpful for students who want to do
further
studies in a foreign country.
For instance
, pupils
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have to
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test
of a foreign
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language
to study over there, it will become too
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easy
for students if there will be
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limited
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languages
in the world.

On the other hand
, if there will be
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limited
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languages
then
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some
cultures could be in
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danger
. As we know, every community has their
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own
mother tongue, which
also
represents its culture and tradition.
Moreover
, if the
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languages
will be
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limited
then the diversity of the community will
also
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get
an effect. India,
for example
, is well known for the several communities which have various
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languages
and it is their unique identity.

To conclude
,
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language
plays a vital role in
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easy
understand. In my opinion, I
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agree
to
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some
extent that if there will be fewer
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languages
then communication between two counties will become
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easy
which can even
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help
for
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business
growth
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but
somewhere it could affect the community's culture.
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IELTS essay Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will. . .

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
291 words
6.5
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