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How we treat animals and protect them

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It is essential that we take care of the animals it is morally wrong for human beings to be cruel to animals, and morally good for human beings to be kind to animals. Human beings and animals always had an important relationship animals can be some of our best friends they can be loyal to us, love us. And serve us moreover they can also defend and die for us Given that animals are creatures that have a soul, body and senses And just like humans, God created them, we must respect them and take good care of them Animals should be treated in the way that is best for the animals concerned - which may not be the way that suits human beings And we must never forget that animals also have the right to live In case of bad weather, think about them and provide them with food and shelter We should be grateful to them and we must not harass them for our selfish purposes. We have not to beat them to perform the tricks for circus. We should not overload them for transportation  or kill them for our needs. The hunters should not hunt them. In zoo, the animals should be looked after well  The visitors also should not tease or harass them. in these way we can treat and protect animals without hurt them.
It is essential that we take care of the
animals
it is
morally
wrong
for
human
beings to be cruel to
animals
, and
morally
good
for
human
beings to be kind to animals.

Human beings and
animals
always had an
important
relationship
animals
can be
some
of our best friends they can be loyal to us,
love
us. And serve us
moreover
they can
also
defend and
die
for us
Given
that
animals
are creatures that have a soul, body and senses And
just
like
humans
, God created them, we
must
respect them and take
good
care of them
Animals
should
be treated
in the way
that is
best for the
animals
concerned
-
which may not be the way that suits
human
beings And we
must
never forget that
animals
also
have the right to
live
In case of
bad
weather,
think
about them and provide them with food and shelter We should be grateful to
them and
we
must
not harass them for our selfish purposes. We have not to beat them to perform the tricks for circus. We should not overload them for transportation
 
or kill them for our needs. The hunters should not hunt them. In zoo, the
animals
should
be looked
after well
 
The visitors
also
should not tease or harass them.

in
these way
we can treat and protect
animals
without hurt them.
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IELTS essay How we treat animals and protect them

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
229 words
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