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EVERY COUNTRY SHOULD MAKE EVERYTHING OF THIS COUNTRY INSTEAD OF RELYING ON OTHER COUNTRY, DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

EVERY COUNTRY SHOULD MAKE EVERYTHING OF THIS COUNTRY INSTEAD OF RELYING ON OTHER COUNTRY, VplK

I strongly disagree that every country can produce enough of everything because for sure each country has to rely on other country due to the fact that each country has its own capacity and its own features to its limit, hence is not sufficient to sustain in country with limited items. Although there are lot of things in each country either east or west of the globe, each of them have its own speciality like UAE land is good for fuel where as India land is good for agriculture, therefore import and export is essential between the countries to help each other and to get the product which is in need. Though relying on other countries for import and export of different products attracts the people of the country to buy new products even though if it is expensive, as a result it gives growth in economy of the country and by this mean country can fulfill the demands of the citizens to meet their daily needs. However, taking and giving is a part of life therefore in the same way import and export is the same to sustain our life easily. In olden days export and import used to be by water way but after lot of developments its every easy for each country for export and import the product either by water, air or road way. By this, people get more job opportunities and country develops. In a conclusion, I disagree that all countries should produce enough of everything and not to rely on other countries.

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 disagree that every You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 can produce This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
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because
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country
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has to
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country
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country
 has its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 capacity and its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 features to its limit, hence
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country
 with limited items.

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lot of
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country
 either east or west of the globe, each of them have its This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
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speciality
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good
 for fuel Did you mean "whereas"?whereas
where as
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good
 for agriculture, therefore
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import
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
export
 is essential between the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 each You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
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 and to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
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product
 which is in need.

Though relying on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
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countries
 for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconstruction
import
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
export
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different
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products
 attracts the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
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products
even though
 if it is expensive, as a result
 it gives growth in economy of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 and by this mean You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 can fulfill the demands of the citizens to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 their daily needs.

However
, taking and giving is a part of life therefore
in the same way
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import
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
export
 is the same to sustain our life easily
. In olden days You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
export
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconstruction
import
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used
 to be by water way This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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lot of
 developments its every easy for each You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshipdumpsmuggletransport
export
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withconstruction
import
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 either by water, air or road way. By this, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 more job opportunities and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 develops.

In a conclusion, I disagree that all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 should produce This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 of everything and not to rely on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
. 