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Write about the following topic: Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

: Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. ajR7
Health is first and foremost important commodity for any human being in the world. Several countries boasts of their universal health care system such as Canada, Germany and Belgium, which is free. On the contrary, numerous nationalities does not provide free health service in a comprehensive manner. In addition, there is no concept of free health system in small number of countries irrespective of expenditure involved in the treatment. However, there is an ongoing debate over provision of free health care around the world. In my opinion, every country should explore many options in order to facilitate health services to each and every individual. In other words, arrangement of complete free health care is highly essential to the people who are below the poverty line, who cannot afford advanced medical treament. For this, government has to inititate effective schemes and dedicated department to implement efficiently. On the other hand, government should allow private agencies to create flexible policies in terms of critical, emergency, long term and general health insurances to wealthy individuals for their health essentials. Further, government should monitor and implement stringent measures to mitigate misusage of any private health insurance schemes. Additionally, In conclusion, though, implementation of comprehensive free health is expensive, every country has to explore alternatives that assures universal health services the poor families. Government should impose more taxes on corporate and other wealthy people to raise funds for these health schemes. After all, a healthy being contributes so much to the development of the country. Therefore, free health care is everybody's right.
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commodity for any human being in the world. Several
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countries
boasts of their universal
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health
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system such as Canada, Germany and Belgium, which is
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free
.
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, numerous nationalities does not provide
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free
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service
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in a comprehensive manner
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, there is no concept of
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free
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health
system in
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small
number of
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countries
irrespective of expenditure involved in the treatment.
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, there is an ongoing debate over provision of
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free
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health
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around the world.

In my opinion, every
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country
should explore
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many
options in order to facilitate
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health
services to each and every individual.
In other words
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free
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health
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care
is
highly
essential to the
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people
who are below the poverty line, who cannot afford advanced medical
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treament
. For this,
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government
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inititate
effective schemes and dedicated department to implement
efficiently
.

On the other hand
,
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government
should
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allow
private agencies to create flexible policies in terms of critical, emergency, long term and general
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health
insurances to wealthy individuals for their
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health
essentials.
Further
,
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government
should monitor and implement stringent measures to mitigate
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misusage
of any private
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health
insurance schemes.
Additionally
,

In conclusion
, though, implementation of comprehensive
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free
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health
is expensive, every
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country
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has to
explore alternatives that assures universal
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health
services the poor families.
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Government
should impose more taxes on corporate and other wealthy
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people
to raise funds for these
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health
schemes.
After all
, a healthy being contributes
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so
much to the development of the
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country
.
Therefore
,
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health
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is everybody's right.
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IELTS essay : Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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