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Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? W735
Poverty is one of the pressing issues for undeveloped and developing nations. Poor people can be found all over the world and every country works to vanish poverty. In this essay, I will discuss about few reasons for impoverishment and solutions to overcome deprivation issues. The foremost reason of poverty is insufficiency of employment opportunities. As a consequence, people are forced to work for a such low wages which are not even enough to fullfill their basic need of food and accommodation. For instance, in India, more than 50% of population comes under poverty line and these people sleep on footpaths, and beg for food. In order to overcome the problem of deprivation, Government authorities must find adequate ways to generate plethora of jobs for its people. The another reason for numerous of underprivileged people in almost every country is 'disparity of income'. In every nation, there are people who earn substantial amount of money from their jobs or businesses while few people cannot make enough money to support their livelihood. To illustrate, people working in technical fields are offered handsome salary packages. On the other hand skilled labor is exploited and underpaid. Government must set a minimum wage value, so that everyone can get the value of their hard work. As a result of which most people would be encouraged to cross the poverty line and come above it. In conclusion, although every nation face problems related to impoverishment but these problems are not insurmountable. In my view, it is government responsibility to the poverty issue, and they should begin by considering some of the solutions proposed above.
Poverty
is one of the pressing issues for undeveloped and developing nations. Poor
people
can
be found
all over the world and every country works to vanish
poverty
. In this essay, I will
discuss about few
reasons for impoverishment and solutions to overcome deprivation issues.

The foremost reason of
poverty
is insufficiency of employment opportunities. As a consequence,
people
are forced
to work for a such low wages which are not even
enough
to
fullfill
their basic need of food and accommodation.
For instance
, in India, more than 50% of population
comes
under
poverty
line and these
people
sleep on footpaths, and beg for food. In order to overcome the problem of deprivation,
Government
authorities
must
find adequate ways to generate plethora of jobs for its
people
.

The another reason for numerous of underprivileged
people
in almost every country is 'disparity of income'. In every nation, there are
people
who earn substantial amount of money from their jobs or businesses while few
people
cannot
make
enough
money to support their livelihood. To illustrate,
people
working in technical fields
are offered
handsome salary packages.
On the other hand
skilled labor
is exploited
and underpaid.
Government
must
set a minimum wage value,
so
that everyone can
get
the value of their
hard
work.
As a result
of which most
people
would
be encouraged
to cross the
poverty
line and
come
above it.

In conclusion
, although every nation face problems related to impoverishment
but
these problems are not insurmountable. In my view, it is
government
responsibility to the
poverty
issue, and they should
begin
by considering
some of the
solutions proposed above.
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IELTS essay Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
269 words
6.0
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