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Every Country Has Poor People And Every Country Has Different Ways Of Dealing With The Poor

Every Country Has Poor People And Every Country Has Different Ways Of Dealing With The Poor 8dOL5
in the world of corner, every country has specific livelihoods that contains every people's living standard. There is definition of being poor and rich in society that differentiate between people. It is necessary duty that government has to take step on these kinds of people and make their lives into the the standard of living. Therefore every governments have their own way to help whom do not have enough living expenses and improve their lives. i would like to explain what would be the main reasons for having many people who can not afford primary usage. First of all,
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in
the world of corner, every country has specific livelihoods that contains every
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people
's living standard. There is definition of being poor and rich in society that differentiate between
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people
. It is necessary duty that
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government
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has to
take step on these kinds of
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people
and
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make
their
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lives
into
Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.
the the
standard of living.
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Therefore
every
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "government"?
governments
have their
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own
way to
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help
whom do not have
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enough
living expenses and
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improve
their
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lives
.
Did you mean "I"?
i
would like to
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explain
what would be the main reasons for having
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many
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people
who can not afford primary usage.
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
,
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IELTS essay Every Country Has Poor People And Every Country Has Different Ways Of Dealing With The Poor

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
99 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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