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Every boy is influenced by his father and every girl is influenced by her mother. do you agree or dis agree.

Every boy is influenced by his father and every girl is influenced by her mother. do you agree or dis agree. gGyE7
Since, family and parents are the first teacher for any child, every child is somehow influenced by either their mother of father or both. However, I have a distinct view about parental inspiration on child. A girl child can be overwhelmed by her father. Similarly, a boy child can be influence by her mother. This essay explained, how a boy can take his mother as a source of inspiration and a girl child can be influenced by her father. Firstly, in todays where the concept of being single mother or father exist, any one can take a responsibility of there baby. A daughter who is very closed to her father and finds her dad in each steps of her life, can be take her father as source of inspiration. Even a single father can a raise a girl child beautifully. Not only a son can follows father footsteps, but also a daughter can also. For examples, in many families, daughters are called as a princess of king. Similarly, a son who have been grownup in a mother's shadows, can be attached to his mother. For example, in many household boys is called as mother's prince. There is a popular saying that, if a boy is attached to his mother he want her would be wife be like her mother. In a same way, if a daughter is closed to her father she wants her would be husband be like her father. Therefore, saying that, girl is influenced by mother and boy is influenced by father may not be justifiable to both the parents.
Since, family and parents are the
first
teacher for any
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child
, every
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child
is somehow influenced by either their
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mother
of
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father
or both.
However
, I have a distinct view about parental inspiration on
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child
. A
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girl
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child
can
be overwhelmed
by her
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father
.
Similarly
, a
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boy
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child
can be influence by her
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mother
. This essay
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explained
, how a
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boy
can take his
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mother
as a source of inspiration and a
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girl
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child
can
be influenced
by her father.

Firstly
, in
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todays
where the concept of being single
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mother
or
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father
exist,
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any one
can take a responsibility of
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there
baby. A
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daughter
who is
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very
closed to her
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father
and finds her dad in each
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steps
of her life, can be
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take
her
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father
as source of inspiration. Even a single
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father
can a raise a
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girl
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child
beautifully
. Not
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only
a son can
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follows
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father
footsteps,
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but
also
a
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daughter
can
also
. For examples, in
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many
families,
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daughters
are called
as a princess of king.

Similarly
, a son who have been grownup in a mother's shadows, can
be attached
to his
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mother
.
For example
, in
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many
household
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boys
is called
as mother's prince. There is a popular saying that, if a
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boy
is attached
to his
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mother
he
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want
her would be wife be like her
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mother
.
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In a same way
, if a
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daughter
is closed
to her
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father
she wants her would be
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husband
be like her father.

Therefore
, saying that,
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girl
is influenced
by
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mother
and
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boy
is influenced
by
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father
may not be justifiable to both the parents.
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IELTS essay Every boy is influenced by his father and every girl is influenced by her mother. do you agree or dis agree.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
263 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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