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Even though science and technology has improved a great deal, the type of diseases increase day by day. Why is it so? How can it be controlled?

Even though science and technology has improved a great deal, the type of diseases increase day by day. Why is it so? How can it be controlled? oRkbb
The development of science and technology has undoubtedly reduced the number of occurrences of same old diseases. However, can it prevent the spreading of new diseases in the future? New diseases are reported along with the passage of time. Various factors evidently trigger it. A host of suggestive touches might bring about encouraging changes in it. Admittedly, the sophistication of science and technology has massively enhanced the luxury and comfort level. Thereby, the physical exertion witnesses a backlash. The very same scenario forces people to lead a sedentary life style, a perfect abode of all lifestyle diseases. Technology is good enough to identify diseases once contracted with and science is capable enough to suggest curative measures to it. However, the chances for the development of new diseases are still left open. The radical shift in lifestyles created by science and technology leads to the spreading of new diseases. The technological appliances like TV and refrigerator deplete the environmental stability which further results in subsequent fresh ailments. For example, the consumption of food stored in refrigerator heavily contributes to the growth of cancerous cells. On top, food adulteration due to scientific and technological innovations creates unexpected and unpredictable diseases. As for suggestions, return to nature seems to be the need of the time. Human lifestyles should synchronize with the beats of the earth where pollution and adulteration find no place. Science and technology should foster the fine fabric of human life and the nature. Tampering with it could lead to apocalypse. The needs should be prioritized as unrealistic demand forces business fraternity to devise unscrupulous ways for quick bucks. The application of cosmetic products and the intake of instant and junk foods should be limited as to see an encouraging reduction in the new diseases. A fine line in terms of the use of gadgets and appliances can also be drawn to reduce the possibility of new diseases. As an instance, an illiterate farmer in rural India lives healthier and longer than a techie in urban set up. That being said, the speed of modernity triggered by the development of science and technology has made the world an inhospitable one with unpredictable break-out of new diseases frequently. Prudence will prevail if a concerted effort by both individual and government is taken to check the menace of new diseases and to see the life healthier and the nature greener.
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diseases
.
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prevent
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diseases
in the future?
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diseases
are reported
along with the passage of time. Various factors
evidently
trigger it. A host of suggestive touches might bring about encouraging
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changes
in it.

Admittedly
, the sophistication of
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science
and
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technology
has
massively
enhanced the luxury and comfort level. Thereby, the physical exertion witnesses a backlash. The
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very
same scenario forces
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people
to lead a sedentary life style, a perfect abode of all lifestyle
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diseases
.
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Technology
is
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good
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enough
to identify
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diseases
once contracted with and
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science
is capable
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enough
to suggest curative measures to it.
However
, the chances for the development of
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new
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diseases
are
still
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left
open. The radical shift in lifestyles created by
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science
and
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technology
leads to the spreading of
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new
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diseases
. The technological appliances like TV and refrigerator deplete the environmental stability which
further
results in subsequent fresh ailments.
For example
, the consumption of food stored in refrigerator
heavily
contributes to the growth of cancerous cells. On top, food adulteration due to scientific and technological innovations creates unexpected and unpredictable diseases.

As for suggestions, return to nature seems to be the need of the time. Human lifestyles should synchronize with the beats of the earth where pollution and adulteration find no place.
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Science
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
technology
should foster the fine fabric of human life and the nature. Tampering with it could lead to apocalypse. The needs should
be prioritized
as unrealistic demand forces business fraternity to devise unscrupulous ways for quick bucks. The application of cosmetic products and the intake of instant and junk foods should
be limited
as to
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see
an encouraging reduction in the
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new
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diseases
. A fine line in terms of the
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use
of gadgets and appliances can
also
be drawn
to
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reduce
the possibility of
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new
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diseases
. As an instance, an illiterate farmer in rural India
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lives
healthier and longer than a techie in urban set up.

That
being said
, the speed of modernity triggered by the development of
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science
and
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technology
has made the world an inhospitable one with unpredictable break-out of
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new
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diseases
frequently
. Prudence will prevail if a concerted effort by both individual and
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government
is taken
to
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check
the menace of
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new
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diseases
and to
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see
the life healthier and the nature greener.
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IELTS essay Even though science and technology has improved a great deal, the type of diseases increase day by day. Why is it so? How can it be controlled?

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397 words
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