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Even though globalization affects the world's economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. What is your view? Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Even though globalization affects the world's economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. What is your view? Discuss. 6Vyx
In today's world, economy is being looked from a global perspective instead of the individual countries. This definitely is a positive outlook as we're being drawn towards globalization. While some believe, there are many cons due to this, I personally believe this has several advantages which I'll state them in my essay with appropriate examples. Some critics argue that globalization does not change the poverty in the developing nations. They continue to be poorer as it is the skilled workers that will be working in the multi-national companies. For instance, in the Information Technology companies, highly qualified professionals with adequate knowledge, skills and fluent english speakers are employed and are given higher salaries whereas, below poverty line people are still jobless and unemployed. As a consequence, country's poverty line will still remain the same and so, the nation can never be listed under developed countries. On the other hand, if economy is evaluated globally it could promote free trading. In other words, cross-border trading becomes more easier with void or negligible international taxes. For example, goods could be manufactured in one country, whereas sold in a different one. Moreover, the start-ups or industries with high potential could increase their sales by gaining international popularity within limited time. Therefore, for yet to be developed countries, this will definitely be advantageous. As a conclusion, despite the disadvantages of no changes to standards of living of poorer people, the economical benefits from world's globalization are numerous. Hence, without any hesitation, globalization will increase one's horizons and broadens employment opportunities.
In
today
's world, economy is
being looked
from a global perspective
instead
of the individual countries. This definitely is a
positive
outlook as we're
being drawn
towards globalization. While
some
believe, there are
many
cons due to this, I
personally
believe this has several advantages which I'll state them in my essay with appropriate examples.

Some
critics argue that globalization does not
change
the poverty in the developing nations. They continue to be poorer as it is the skilled workers that will be working in the multi-national
companies
.
For instance
, in the Information Technology
companies
,
highly
qualified professionals with adequate knowledge,
skills
and fluent
english
speakers
are employed
and are
given
higher salaries whereas, below poverty line
people
are
still
jobless and unemployed. As a consequence, country's poverty line will
still
remain the same and
so
, the nation can never
be listed
under
developed countries
.

On the other hand
, if economy
is evaluated
globally it could promote free trading.
In other words
, cross-border trading becomes
more easier
with void or negligible international taxes.
For example
,
goods
could
be manufactured
in one country, whereas sold in a
different
one.
Moreover
, the
start
-ups or industries with high potential could increase their sales by gaining international popularity within limited time.
Therefore
, for
yet
to be
developed countries
, this will definitely be advantageous.

As a conclusion, despite the disadvantages of no
changes
to standards of living of poorer
people
, the
economical
benefits from world's globalization are numerous.
Hence
, without any hesitation, globalization will increase one's horizons and broadens employment opportunities.
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IELTS essay Even though globalization affects the world's economies in a very positive way, its negative side should not be forgotten. What is your view? Discuss.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
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