Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Even though doctors worldwide agree that fast food is bad for people's health more and more people are eating it.

Even though doctors worldwide agree that fast food is bad for people's health more and more people are eating it. Ork7N
I believe that home-made meals take a lot of time to prepare. The process of preparation is quite long. From going to the supermarket to prepping for the meals. In my country, another problem is the fact that unhealthy foods like burgers and fries are expensive to buy than regular healthy meals fruits and vegetables. Despite this, there is an increasing number of people eating fast food. This can solve firstly must shoot a video about fast food that how fast foods are dangerous for health also here must show terrible the reason why people are think
I believe that home-made meals take
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
a lot of
time to prepare. The process of preparation is quite long. From going to the supermarket to prepping for the meals. In my country, another problem is the fact that unhealthy foods like burgers and fries are expensive to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
than regular healthy meals fruits and vegetables. Despite this, there is an increasing number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
eating
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
food.

This can solve
firstly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
shoot a video about
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
food that how
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
foods are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
dangerous
for health
also
here
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
terrible the reason why
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think

IELTS essay Even though doctors worldwide agree that fast food is bad for people's health more and more people are eating it.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
96 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Even though doctors worldwide agree that fast food is bad for people's health more and more people are eating it.