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Evaluate the importance of festivals and celebrations in uniting the people of your country.

Evaluate the importance of festivals and celebrations in uniting the people of your country. jmLN
Festivals are larger than life celebrations of various things. They occur at regular intervals and helping in breaking the monotony of life. Furthermore, they give you the chance to celebrate the little and big things in life. Festivals are the carriers of peace and joy in the communities. All nations of the world have certain religious and cultural festivals. However, India is one of the largest countries to celebrate numerous festivals. As India is a very cultural and diverse country, so are the festivals. They divide into three general categories of national, religious and seasonal. As we can divide the Indian festivals into national, religious and seasonal, we see how they differ from each other. In general, national festivals are celebrated in honor of reputable people and events. The religious ones follow legends of faiths and their beliefs. The seasonal ones are celebrated with each season that we experience that varies from region to region. The National festivals include Republic Day, Independence Day, Gandhi Jayanti and more. These festivals are celebrated all over India. All the citizens of the country celebrate them irrespective of the religion, caste, creed, and sex. Everyone celebrates them with great patriotism. These festivals are gazetted holidays all over the country and are enjoyed with great enthusiasm. Moreover, they help in setting aside the differences of the countrymen and unite each other like never before. The capital of India, New Delhi is the seat of national festivals. For instance, it witnesses the grand parade of the Republic Day. The flag hoisting takes place in New Delhi, which is broadcasted on national television for the whole country to see. The religious festivals are one of the most famous festivals not only throughout India but over the world. Some of the most prominent religious festivals are Diwali, Eid-Ul-Fitr, Christmas, Guru Nanak Jayanti, Holi and many more. Diwali and Holi are the most prominent festivals of the Hindu religion. They are very colorful and full of lights. Next up, Eid-Ul-Fitr is an Islamic festival which celebrates the end of Ramadan. It is about delectable dishes and family gatherings. Christmas celebrates the birthday of Jesus Christ. Furthermore, it is about Christmas trees and Santa Claus. Guru Nanak Jayanti celebrates the birthday of Guru Nanak Dev. Finally, the particular regions of the country celebrate seasonal festivals. For instance, Bihu is a festival of Assam. Likewise, Tamil Nadu celebrates Pongal. In addition, there is Basant Panchami which people celebrate through North India and West Bengal as well. Festivals are very important. They make us forget our cultural and religious differences. They unite people and they come together for the sole purpose of celebration and happiness. Other than that, festivals also help us embrace our culture and religion. They are very helpful in breaking the monotony of life. Moreover, people look forward to festivals all-round the year. Festivals spark joy and give people something to look forward to. In addition, people also repair their homes and paint them that look like brand new. It beautifies the look of the locality. In short, festivals fill our lives with colors and enthusiasm. They bring us closer every year and eliminate any feelings of communal hatred. Further, they strengthen the bonds of the community and remove the malice from people’s hearts. Therefore, festivals are quite important and must be celebrated with passion.
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Festivals
are larger than life celebrations of various things. They occur at regular intervals and helping in breaking the monotony of life.
Furthermore
, they give you the chance to
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celebrate
the
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little
and
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big
things in life.
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Festivals
are the carriers of peace and joy in the communities. All nations of the world have certain
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religious
and cultural
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festivals
.
However
, India is one of the largest
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countries
to
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celebrate
numerous
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festivals
. As India is a
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very
cultural and diverse
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country
,
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so
are the
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festivals
. They divide into three general categories of
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national
,
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religious
and
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seasonal
. As we can divide the Indian
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festivals
into
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national
,
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religious
and
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seasonal
, we
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see
how they differ from each other.
In general
,
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national
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festivals
are celebrated
in honor of reputable
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people
and
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events
. The
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religious
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ones
follow legends of faiths and their beliefs. The
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seasonal
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ones
are celebrated
with each season that we experience that varies from region to region.
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The
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National
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festivals
include Republic Day, Independence Day, Gandhi
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Jayanti
and more. These
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festivals
are celebrated
all over India. All the citizens of the
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country
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celebrate
them irrespective of the religion, caste, creed, and sex. Everyone
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celebrates
them with great patriotism. These
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festivals
are gazetted
holidays all over the
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country
and
are enjoyed
with great enthusiasm.
Moreover
, they
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help
in setting aside the differences of the countrymen and unite each other like never
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before
. The capital of India, New Delhi is the seat of
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national
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festivals
.
For instance
, it witnesses the grand parade of the Republic Day. The flag hoisting takes place in New Delhi, which
is broadcasted
on
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national
television for the whole
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country
to
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see
. The
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religious
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festivals
are one of the most
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famous
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festivals
not
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only
throughout India
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but
over the world.
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Some
of the most prominent
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religious
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festivals
are Diwali,
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Eid-Ul-Fitr
, Christmas, Guru Nanak
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Jayanti
,
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Holi
and
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many
more. Diwali and
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Holi
are the most prominent
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festivals
of the Hindu religion. They are
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very
colorful and full of lights.

Next
up,
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Eid-Ul-Fitr
is an Islamic
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festival
which
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celebrates
the
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end
of Ramadan. It is about delectable dishes and family gatherings. Christmas
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celebrates
the birthday of Jesus Christ.
Furthermore
, it is about Christmas trees and Santa Claus. Guru Nanak
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Jayanti
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celebrates
the birthday of Guru Nanak Dev.
Finally
, the particular regions of the
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country
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celebrate
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seasonal
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festivals
.
For instance
,
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Bihu
is a
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festival
of Assam.
Likewise
, Tamil Nadu
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celebrates
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Pongal
.
In addition
, there is
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Basant
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Panchami
which
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people
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celebrate
through North India and West Bengal
as well
.
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Festivals
are
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very
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important
. They
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make
us forget our cultural and
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religious
differences. They unite
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people and
they
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come
together for the sole purpose of celebration and happiness. Other than that,
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festivals
also
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help
us embrace our culture and religion. They are
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very
helpful in breaking the monotony of life.

Moreover
,
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people
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look
forward to
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festivals
all-round the year.
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Festivals
spark joy and give
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people
something to
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look
forward to.
In addition
,
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people
also
repair their homes and paint them that
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look
like brand new. It beautifies the
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look
of the locality.

In short,
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festivals
fill our
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lives
with colors and enthusiasm. They bring us closer every year and eliminate any feelings of communal hatred.
Further
, they strengthen the bonds of the community and remove the malice from
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people’s
hearts.
Therefore
,
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festivals
are quite
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important
and
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must
be celebrated
with passion.
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IELTS essay Evaluate the importance of festivals and celebrations in uniting the people of your country.

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4 paragraphs
556 words
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