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The reading claims that there are many critics that ethanol is not a good replacement for gasoline and provides three reasons of support. However, the professor states that ethanol is a good alternative for gasoline and the reasons are not convincing. He refutes each of the author's reasons. First, the article avers that the increased use of ethanol fuel would not help to solve one of the biggest environmental problems caused by gasoline use; global warming. In contrast, the lecturer opposes this point by saying that ethanol fuel will not add global warming. In fact, he says it is true that ethanol fuel when is burned, it releases carbon dioxide to the atmosphere but it made from plants such as corn and this counters the releasing of the gas since every growing of plants will absorb this carbon dioxide. So, growing plants will remove the gas from the atmosphere. Second, the reading asserts that the production of significant amounts of ethanol would dramatically reduce the amount of plants available for uses other than fuel. On the other hand, the professor counters this point by stating that this will not reduce of these resources because the ethanol can produce from cellulose, which is component of plants in the cell wall, so this will not affect the source of animals. This appears a contradiction to the information made in the passage. Third, the artical posits that ethanol fuel will never be able to compete with gasoline on price. Conversely, the professor casts doubt on this point by explaining that in the future, there will not be compete with gasoline in price. Accroding to the professor, when enough people will buy this fuel, the government subsidies will stop and the production will increase so this leads to reduce the price of the fuel. He mentions that the production will increase three times than gasoline and the proce will drop off by 40%.
The reading claims that there are
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many
critics that
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ethanol
is not a
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good
replacement for
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gasoline
and provides three reasons of support.
However
, the
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professor
states that
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ethanol
is a
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good
alternative for
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gasoline
and the reasons are not convincing. He refutes each of the author's reasons.

First
, the article avers that the increased
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use
of
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ethanol
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fuel
would not
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help
to solve one of the biggest environmental problems caused by
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gasoline
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use
; global warming.
In contrast
, the lecturer opposes this point by saying that
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ethanol
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fuel
will not
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add
global warming. In fact, he says it is true that
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ethanol
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fuel
when
is burned
, it releases carbon dioxide to the atmosphere
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but
it made from
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plants
such as corn and this counters the releasing of the gas since every growing of
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plants
will absorb this carbon dioxide.
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So
, growing
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plants
will remove the gas from the atmosphere.

Second, the reading asserts that the production of significant amounts of
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ethanol
would
dramatically
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reduce
the amount of
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plants
available for
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uses
other than
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fuel
.
On the other hand
, the
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professor
counters this point by stating that this will not
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reduce
of these resources
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because
the
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ethanol
can produce from cellulose, which is component of
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plants
in the cell wall,
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so
this will not affect the source of animals. This appears a contradiction to the information made in the passage.

Third, the
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artical
posits that
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ethanol
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fuel
will never be able to compete with
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gasoline
on price.
Conversely
, the
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professor
casts doubt on this point by explaining that in the future, there will not be
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compete
with
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gasoline
in price.
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Accroding
to the
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professor
, when
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enough
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people
will
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buy
this
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fuel
, the
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government
subsidies will
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stop
and the production will increase
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so
this leads to
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reduce
the price of the
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fuel
. He mentions that the production will increase three
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times
than
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gasoline
and the
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proce
will drop off by 40%.
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IELTS essay ethanol fuel

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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