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The reading claims that some paleontologists interpert lines found surrounding the skeletal bones of Sinosauropteryx as evidence that it had feathers, but critics have opposed this idea for several reasons.

The reading claims that some paleontologists interpert lines found surrounding the skeletal bones of Sinosauropteryx as evidence that it had feathers, but critics have opposed this idea for several reasons. XG3Dg
The reading claims that some paleontologists interpert lines found surrounding the skeletal bones of Sinosauropteryx as evidence that it had feathers, but critics have opposed this idea for several reasons. However, the professor states that the evidence is indicated that Sinosauropteryx had feathers and the reasons in in the article are not convincing. She refutes each of the author's reasons. First, the article avers that the fines lines may not even represent funtional structures of a living dinosaur, but rather structures that were formed after the animal's death. On the other hand, the professor opposes this point by saying that the result indicated that there is no decomposition buried there. In fact, the evidence show that the skin is represented in ash and the other fossil of dinosaur well preserved and the lines in the fossil are possible feathers and not decomposition. Second, the reading asserts that scientists can not tell with certainly what part of the dinosaur's anatomy the structures were. Conversely, the lecutrer counters this point by stating that there is important chemical different between feather and frill. She says that feather contains special protein called perkeratin, but frill does not contain this protein. Actually, scientists did find this protein and this approve that these lines are feathers and not frill. Third, the passage posits that the structures represented by the lines in the Sinosauropteryx fossil were mostly located along backbone and the tail of the animal. However, the professor casts doubt on this point by explaining that dinosaur can use feathers for other things, not for theremoregulation. She explains that special birds have long feather in the tail to attract mate, and this strongly support that Sinosauropteryx that used feathers to display function because they found that dinosaur showed colored feathers.
The reading claims that
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some
paleontologists
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interpert
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lines
found surrounding the skeletal bones of
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Sinosauropteryx
as evidence that it had
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feathers
,
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but
critics have opposed this
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idea
for several reasons.
However
, the professor states that the evidence
is indicated
that
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Sinosauropteryx
had
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feathers
and the reasons
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in in
the article are not convincing. She refutes each of the author's reasons.

First
, the article avers that the fines
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lines
may not even represent
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funtional
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structures
of a living
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dinosaur
,
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but
rather
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structures
that
were formed
after the animal's death.
On the other hand
, the professor opposes this point by saying that the result indicated that there is no decomposition buried there. In fact, the evidence
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show
that the skin
is represented
in ash and the other fossil of
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dinosaur
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well preserved
and the
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lines
in the fossil are possible
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feathers
and not decomposition.

Second, the reading asserts that scientists can not
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tell
with
certainly
what part of the dinosaur's anatomy the
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structures
were.
Conversely
, the
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lecutrer
counters this point by stating that there is
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important
chemical
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different
between
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feather
and frill. She says that
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feather
contains special protein called
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perkeratin
,
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but
frill does not contain this protein. Actually, scientists did find this protein and this approve that these
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lines
are
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feathers
and not frill.

Third, the passage posits that the
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structures
represented by the
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lines
in the
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Sinosauropteryx
fossil were
mostly
located along backbone and the tail of the animal.
However
, the professor casts doubt on this point by explaining that
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dinosaur
can
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use
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feathers
for other things, not for
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theremoregulation
. She
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explains
that special birds have long
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feather
in the tail to attract mate, and this
strongly
support that
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Sinosauropteryx
that
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used
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feathers
to display function
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because
they found that
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dinosaur
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showed
colored
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feathers
.
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IELTS essay The reading claims that some paleontologists interpert lines found surrounding the skeletal bones of Sinosauropteryx as evidence that it had feathers, but critics have opposed this idea for several reasons.

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