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Essay Topic Mobile Phone is a great invention of science. However, there are many disadvantages of it. Discribe both advantages and disadvantages of mobile phone.

Essay Topic Mobile Phone is a great invention of science. However, there are many disadvantages of it. Discribe both advantages and disadvantages of mobile phone. My8ye
Its is true that there are many achivement of science and mobile phone is one of the most populer or great invention of science which is more famous and useable item in our socity. However it is useful as well as there are many drawback of it. we will highlight some of them in this article. Easily connect with your family and friends cheap communication keep it with you or carry easily In free time click pictures from it and shear it with your loved once play games on it buy many things online through mobile do your one business through it Spend to much time on it keep away from your near once effect your eyes mentally ill or sick no physical activity lake of knoladge how to use the ultraviolet rays effect In conclusion, this invention is effective and has many drawbacks. We are the one how deside how to use this kind of invention in a proper way. Science invent something for human facilities, we decide whether its useful or harmful for our society
Its is true that there are
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many
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achivement
of science and mobile phone is one of the most
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populer


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or
great invention of science which is more
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famous
and useable item in our
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socity
.

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However
it is useful
as well
as there are
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many drawback
of it. we will highlight
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some
of them in this article.

Easily
connect with your family and friends

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cheap
communication

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keep
it with you or carry
easily


In free time click pictures from it and shear it with your
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loved
once

play games on it

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buy
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many
things online through mobile

do your one business through it

Spend
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to
much time on it
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keep
away from your near once

effect your eyes

mentally ill or sick

no physical activity

lake of
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knoladge
how to
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use


the ultraviolet rays effect

In conclusion
, this invention is effective and has
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many
drawbacks. We are the one how
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deside
how to

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use
this kind of invention
Consider replacing "in a proper way" with the adverb for "proper"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a proper way
.

Science invent something for human facilities, we decide whether its useful or harmful for our society
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IELTS essay Essay Topic Mobile Phone is a great invention of science. However, there are many disadvantages of it. Discribe both advantages and disadvantages of mobile phone.

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