Most individuals are of the view of that social networking websites like Facebook are tremendously detrimental to the people and the community. In my opinion, I believe that besides the negative impacts of these websites they can be beneficial in some cases also.
Using social networking platforms can harm an individual in more than one ways. People, at present, spend too much time surfing these sites and are unable to apply themselves to what is more important, such as work and studies. As a result, the overall productivity of an individual is afflicted which eventually, more often than not, leads to lower job prospects at workplaces and poor grades in academics.
Social media platforms can have negative impacts on the society as a whole as well. Social media users of a community are much less concerned about their surroundings and people around them who might be in an immediate need of help. They are living in their own social circle which creates a sense of deprivation among other members of the community. Moreover, these networking sites are often exploited by some extremists who actively launch anti-state campaigns. These are the biggest sources of spreading social unrest within a community.
Finally, in my view, these platforms can also be used for the betterment of an individual and the society as a whole. Leading news agencies are linked with these networking sites and users can stay updates of latest news and political developments around the globe. Additionally, as a whole, social activists can start social groups on these websites which are oriented towards the welfare of state and its dwellers. As an example, there are active Facebook groups which aim at the settlement and well-being of new immigrants in Canada.
In conclusion, apart from negative effects of social networking platforms, they can also be used constructively for individuals and whole communities.
Most
individuals
are of the view of that
social
networking websites like Facebook are
tremendously
detrimental to the
people
and the
community
. In my opinion, I believe that
besides
the
negative
impacts of these websites they can be beneficial in
some
cases
also
.
Using
social
networking
platforms
can harm an
individual
in more than
one ways
.
People
, at present, spend too much time surfing these sites and are unable to apply themselves to
what is more
important
, such as work and studies.
As a result
, the
overall
productivity of an
individual
is afflicted
which
eventually
, more
often
than not, leads to lower job prospects at workplaces and poor grades in academics.
Social media
platforms
can have
negative
impacts on the society as a
whole
as well
.
Social
media users of a
community
are much less concerned about their surroundings and
people
around them who might be in an immediate need of
help
. They are living in their
own
social
circle which creates a sense of deprivation among other members of the
community
.
Moreover
, these networking sites are
often
exploited by
some
extremists who
actively
launch anti-state campaigns. These are the biggest sources of spreading
social
unrest within a community.
Finally
, in my view, these
platforms
can
also
be
used
for the betterment of an
individual
and the society as a
whole
. Leading news agencies
are linked
with these networking sites and users can stay updates of
latest
news and political developments around the globe.
Additionally
, as a
whole
,
social
activists can
start
social
groups on these websites which
are oriented
towards the welfare of state and its dwellers. As an example, there are active Facebook groups which aim at the settlement and well-being of new immigrants in Canada.
In conclusion
, apart from
negative
effects of
social
networking
platforms
, they can
also
be
used
constructively
for
individuals
and
whole
communities
.
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