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Advantage or disadvantage watching tv

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The advantages and disadvantages of watching TV. Nowadays, every family has a television. We watch TV as a family during meals and at weekends. Today, people can not imagine their lives without TV. There are many advantages and disadvantages of watching TV today. One of the major advantages is that the TV will need us to be aware of the news as well as for the interesting information. In addition to education programs are broadcast on television. This is useful for pupil. One of the other advantages is that entertainment programs and music help to calm and after bad or tiring events. On the other hand watching TV is the biggest thing that disturb for pupil. Unfortunately, there are a deal of obscene movies and TV programs on TV today. These programs change the minds of young. If we incorrect positioning in front of the screen, our vision may decline. In conclusion, there are advantages to watching TV, there also many disadvantages. Such as watching to much TV is harmful to our health

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