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Environmental problems such as pollution and climate change affect all the people in the world. Although global decisions are made to reduce these problems, the solutions are not effective. Why are the solutions ineffective? How can these problems be solved? v.1

Environmental problems such as pollution and climate change affect all the people in the world. Although global decisions are made to reduce these problems, the solutions are not effective. Why are the solutions ineffective? How can these problems be solved? v. 1
Our mother earth is weeping because of the two major threats, pollution and climate change. In spite of many global conferences being held to find out a permanent solution, a promising remedy is yet to be put into action. This essay will shed some light on the need to look for an effective plan and the alternatives that could put an end to these ever growing issues in the near future. There are several reasons to support the ineffectiveness of the solutions provided. Firstly, the more pragmatic the solution is, the more it would be implemented and many decisions which are taken so far to combat the climate changes are less pragmatic. Take for an instance, putting up the usage of private vehicles tends to be something that can only exist in black and white. Secondly, measures taken so far seem like would be effective only in a long run. As a result, we still suffer the consequences of poor air quality, global warming and unpredictable environment. Finally, if only the rules enforced are stringent, is there a possibility for it to be implemented. The figures of authorities are usually less careful about the long-term effects of these global concerns on the future generation. Mitigation! That is what the globe needs. The world leaders take decisions to fight the pollutions and climate change and many of these decisions remain in the papers and never see the daylight. The ideas should be implemented not discussed. The lack of implementation and budget are two main reasons we still have the pollution and increased Earth temperature. However, there are possibilities to make this planet clean and habitable again. For this to happen, sharing of vehicles among commuters of same destination or a reliable public transportation could be introduced. Besides, instead of focusing on long-term actions like reducing deforestation done for residential purposes, plantation of a large number of saplings and creation of awareness programmes for students would be much more operative. Furthermore, a hefty fine for non-environmental friendly activities ought to be followed to make the solutions efficiently. The world leaders have to make things happen rather than discussion and decisions. They should enforce every country to implement the measures they think useful. Funnily, they decide to reduce the number of private vehicles on the roads and yet their countries produce millions of cars to export to other countries and they are investing more on space research than to make the world livable. That’s something that should be taken seriously not lightly. To bring the curtains down, the whys and wherefores of dissolutions that didn’t bear fruits were put in the limelight and also the immediate changes that can be done to hand down the globe as it is to the posterity were suggested
Our mother earth is weeping
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because
of the two major threats, pollution and climate
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change
.
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In spite of
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many
global conferences
being held
to find out a permanent
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solution
, a promising remedy is
yet
to
be put
into action. This essay will shed
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some
light on the need to look for an effective plan and the alternatives that could put an
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end
to these ever growing issues in the near future.

There are several reasons to support the ineffectiveness of the
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solutions
provided.
Firstly
, the more pragmatic the
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solution
is, the more it would
be implemented
and
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many
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decisions
which
are taken
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so
far to combat the climate
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changes
are less pragmatic. Take for an instance, putting up the usage of private vehicles tends to be something that can
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only
exist in black and white.
Secondly
, measures taken
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so
far seem like would be effective
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only
in a long run.
As a result
, we
still
suffer the consequences of poor air quality, global warming and unpredictable environment.
Finally
, if
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only
the
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rules
enforced are stringent, is there a possibility for it to
be implemented
. The figures of authorities are
usually
less careful about the long-term effects of these global concerns on the future generation. Mitigation!
That is
what the globe needs. The world leaders take
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decisions
to fight the pollutions and climate
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change
and
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many
of these
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decisions
remain in the papers and never
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see
the daylight. The
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ideas
should
be implemented
not discussed.
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The
lack of implementation and budget are two main reasons we
still
have the pollution and increased Earth temperature.

However
, there are possibilities to
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make
this planet clean and habitable again. For this to happen, sharing of vehicles among commuters of same destination or a reliable public transportation could
be introduced
.
Besides
,
instead
of focusing on long-term actions like reducing deforestation done for residential purposes, plantation of
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a large number of
saplings and creation of awareness
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programmes
for students would be much more operative.
Furthermore
, a hefty fine for non-environmental friendly activities ought to
be followed
to
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make
the
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solutions
efficiently
. The world leaders
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have to
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make
things happen
rather
than discussion and
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decisions
. They should enforce every country to implement the measures they
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think
useful.
Funnily
, they decide to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the number of private vehicles on the roads and
yet
their countries produce millions of cars to export to other
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
countries and
they are investing more on space research than to
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make
the world livable. That’s something that should
be taken
seriously
not
lightly
.

To bring the curtains down, the
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whys
and wherefores of
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dissolutions
that didn’t bear fruits
were put
in the limelight and
also
the immediate
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changes
that can
be done
to hand down the globe as it is to the posterity
were suggested
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Environmental problems such as pollution and climate change affect all the people in the world. Although global decisions are made to reduce these problems, the solutions are not effective. Why are the solutions ineffective? How can these problems be solved? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
460 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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Task Achievement: 8.0
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