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Environmental problems such as pollution and climate change affect all the people in the world. Although global decisions are made to reduce these problems, the solutions are not effective. Why are the solutions ineffective? How can these problems be solved? v.3

Environmental problems such as pollution and climate change affect all the people in the world. Although global decisions are made to reduce these problems, the solutions are not effective. Why are the solutions ineffective? How can these problems be solved? v. 3
It is undeniable that environmental issues such as global warming and pollution have negative impacts on all countries and these negative consequences would affect the whole world. Even though some global solutions have been addressed to solve these problems, many people believe that they were not effective and efficient. The following essay will discuss some of the reasons why the solutions were not successful and how these issues should be resolved. For a number of reasons, solutions that have been implemented for resolving environmental issues were considered as ineffective. Firstly, solutions were only implemented by certain countries. For example, only a few countries in the world implement carbon monoxide test for vehicles such as Canada or Australia while it should have been done in all countries. Other countries such as India and China are allowing vehicles with all conditions to commute in their streets and roads. Secondly, some countries do not provide clear regulations and laws regarding to environmental issues. For instance, in several countries, there is no fine or penalty when people throw the garbage to the river or sea. As a consequence, oceans are still polluted with waste from these countries. Though many global policies have been taken, many of them are not implemented in many countries. This is the main reason we still have increasing world temperature and pollutions. There are some solutions that the United Nations and governments could consider to resolve these environmental issues. One of the solutions is that it must be agreed and implemented by all countries. For example, Air Conditioners and Refrigerators must not use CFC gas which is dangerous for the ozone layers. These regulations must be implemented internationally, and for countries that still use CFC must be banned and given penalties. And then, each country should have strict regulations regarding to environmental issues and the United Nations should audit each of these countries on a timely manner. By having a review from an independent party, each country is forced to implement friendly environmental practices in their area. In conclusions, I believe that global environmental issues could be resolved, as long as all countries participate in implementing the solutions.
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environmental
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issues
such as
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global
warming and pollution have
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negative
impacts on all
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countries
and these
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negative
consequences would affect the whole world.
Even though
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some
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global
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solutions
have
been addressed
to solve these problems,
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many
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people
believe that they were not effective and efficient. The following essay will discuss
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some of the
reasons why the
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solutions
were not successful and how these
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issues
should
be resolved
.

For a number of reasons,
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solutions
that have been
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implemented
for resolving
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environmental
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issues
were considered
as ineffective.
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,
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solutions
were
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implemented
by certain
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countries
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only
a few
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countries
in the world implement carbon monoxide
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test
for vehicles such as Canada or Australia while it should have
been done
in all
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countries
. Other
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countries
such as India and China are allowing vehicles with all conditions to commute in their streets and roads.
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,
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some
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countries
do not provide
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clear
regulations and laws
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regarding to
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environmental
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issues
.
For instance
, in several
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countries
, there is no fine or penalty when
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people
throw the garbage to the river or sea. As a consequence, oceans are
still
polluted with waste from these
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countries
. Though
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many
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global
policies have
been taken
,
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many
of them are not
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implemented
in
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countries
. This is the main reason we
still
have increasing world temperature and pollutions.

There are
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solutions
that the United Nations and
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governments
could
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consider to resolve
these
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environmental
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issues
. One of the
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solutions
is that it
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must
be
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agreed
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by all
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countries
.
For example
, Air Conditioners and Refrigerators
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must
not
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use
CFC gas which is
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dangerous
for the ozone layers. These regulations
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must
be
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implemented
internationally
, and for
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countries
that
still
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use
CFC
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must
be banned
and
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given
penalties. And then, each
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country
should have strict regulations
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regarding to
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environmental
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issues
and the United Nations should audit each of these
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countries
on a timely manner. By having a review from an independent party, each
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country
is forced
to implement friendly
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environmental
practices in their area.

In conclusions, I believe that
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global
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environmental
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issues
could
be resolved
, as long as all
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countries
participate in implementing the
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solutions
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
45Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS essay Environmental problems such as pollution and climate change affect all the people in the world. Although global decisions are made to reduce these problems, the solutions are not effective. Why are the solutions ineffective? How can these problems be solved? v. 3

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
358 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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