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Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual persons to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual persons to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. with this opinion? O1NG
In recent year, environmental problems are worsening in many countries. Some people argue that we should conserve our environment with international ways. Personally, I totally agree with this opinion. This essay will discuss why I believe is is important to protect our environment as an international level. First, most of serious and significant environment problems appear over boundary of each nations. For example, radioactivity pollution of Japan influences the Pacific Ocean. It is because nuclear power generation companies of Japan discharge their radiation waste water to the ocean. In addition, air pollution of China such as fine dust, affect neighboring countries. It is true that there is no regulation for these kind of environmental issues. Therefore, every nations should make an agreement with neighboring nations about enormous environmental concerns. Secondly, the most efficient way to protect a nation’s environment is strict regulation and policies of the government. In other words, when the government establish regulation and policies for environment, evey companies in the country should allow them. Furthemore, it will influence individual’s behaviors because each individuals can realize seriousness of environmental problems. Moreover, if governments of every countries make the agreement about environmental concerns together, it will have strong influence and we could see the visible effect. In conclusion, it is true that people have different opinions when it comes to how to solve environmental problems. In my opinion, however, I believe that we can conserve our environment efficiently when we try to solve it at a global level. The harder we try internationally, the healthier our planet will be.
In recent year,
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environmental
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problems
are worsening in
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many
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countries
.
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people
argue that we should conserve our
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environment
with international ways.
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totally
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agree
with this opinion. This essay will discuss why I believe
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is is
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important
to protect our
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environment
as an international level.

First
, most of serious and significant
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environment
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problems
appear over boundary of each
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nations
.
For example
, radioactivity pollution of Japan influences the Pacific Ocean. It is
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because
nuclear power generation
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companies
of Japan discharge their radiation waste water to the ocean.
In addition
, air pollution of China such as fine dust, affect neighboring
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countries
. It is true that there is no regulation for
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these kind
of
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environmental
issues.
Therefore
, every
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nations
should
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make
an agreement with neighboring
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nations
about enormous
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environmental
concerns.

Secondly
, the most efficient way to protect a
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nation’s
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environment
is strict regulation and policies of the
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government
.
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, when the
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government
establish regulation and policies for
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environment
,
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evey
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companies
in the
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country
should
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allow
them.
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Furthemore
, it will influence individual’s behaviors
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because
each
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individuals
can realize seriousness of
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environmental
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problems
.
Moreover
, if
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governments
of every
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countries
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make
the agreement about
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environmental
concerns together, it will have strong
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influence and
we could
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see
the visible effect.

In conclusion
, it is true that
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people
have
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different
opinions when it
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comes
to how to solve
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environmental
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problems
. In my opinion,
however
, I believe that we can conserve our
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environment
efficiently
when we try to solve it at a global level. The harder we try
internationally
, the healthier our planet will be.
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IELTS essay Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual persons to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. with this opinion?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
260 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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