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Environmental problems are serious in many countries. It means that the only possible way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent, do you agree or disagree? v.7

Environmental problems are serious in many countries. It means that the only possible way to protect the environment is at an international level. v. 7
IT IS TRUE THAT SURROUNDING WEATHER HAS CHANGED A LOT NOWADYAS THAT AFFECTS THE ENVIRONMENT BY ANY MEANS. CERTAIN IDEAS TO RESOLVE THIS MENACE IS THE FOREIGN LEVEL MANAGEMENT. FIRST OF ALL, THIS ESSAY WOULD 100 DISAGREE WITH THE ABOVE NOTION DUE TO THE MAJOR REASON THAT WILL BE DISCUSSED BELOW AND SECONDLY, SUGGEST THE PRIMARY ALTERNATIVE TO PROTECT THE SURROUNDING AT ARE BEST. WHEN IT COMES TO THE WHETHER CHANGES, THE PROBLEM HAS PSREAD ALL AROUND THE GLOBE THAT HAS DECLINE THE CHANCES OF OBTAINING AIDS FROM ANOTHER TERRITORIES AS THEY ARE AE ALSO FACING THE SAME SITUATION. HENCE, I BELIEVE, IT IS NOT A GOOD IDEA TO GET A ASSET FRON THEM. FOR EXAMPLE, A MUCH RENOUNED NATION THE USE HAS 50% OF THE ISSUES IN COMAPRED TO DEVELOPING COUNTRIES, EVEN THEY HAVE THE LATEST INNOVATIVE INSTRUMENTS OR TOOLS. SO, AS PER MY VIEW, PROVIDING INFORMATION TO THE PUBLIC ABOUT THE CONSEQUENCES OF SURGING THE ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEM COULD ABLE TO HELP TO GET RID OF THIS DETRIMENTAL CONDITION OF THE PLANATE. FOR INSTANCE, AS PER THE UK WHETHER DATA, THERE HAS BEEN 40% DECREASE IN THE SPREADING THE TRASH THAT IS AAFTECTING THE SURROUNDING AND WEATHER OWING TO THE FACT THAT THE UK CIVILIANS HAS A ENOUGH KNOWLEDGE AND UNDERSTANDING OF THE TAKING CARE OF THEIR ENVIRONMENT. IN CONCLUSION, SURROUNDING MENACE INDEED SOLVE IF WE ALL WORK TIGAETHER AS A TEAM. PERHAPS, THIS ACTION REQUIRES THE MAIN SUPPORT FROM THE REGIME TO SOREAD THE AWARENESS AROUND THE CIVILIANS.
IT IS TRUE THAT
SURROUNDING
WEATHER HAS
CHANGED
A LOT
NOWADYAS
THAT AFFECTS THE ENVIRONMENT BY ANY MEANS. CERTAIN
IDEAS
TO RESOLVE THIS MENACE IS THE FOREIGN LEVEL MANAGEMENT.
FIRST OF ALL
, THIS ESSAY WOULD 100 DISAGREE WITH THE ABOVE NOTION DUE TO THE MAJOR REASON THAT WILL
BE DISCUSSED
BELOW AND
SECONDLY
, SUGGEST THE PRIMARY ALTERNATIVE TO PROTECT THE
SURROUNDING
AT ARE BEST.

WHEN IT
COMES
TO THE WHETHER
CHANGES
, THE PROBLEM HAS
PSREAD
ALL AROUND THE GLOBE THAT HAS DECLINE THE CHANCES OF OBTAINING AIDS FROM ANOTHER TERRITORIES AS THEY ARE AE
ALSO
FACING THE SAME SITUATION.
HENCE
, I BELIEVE, IT IS NOT A
GOOD
IDEA
TO
GET
A ASSET
FRON THEM
.
FOR EXAMPLE
, A MUCH
RENOUNED
NATION THE
USE
HAS 50% OF THE ISSUES IN
COMAPRED
TO
DEVELOPING COUNTRIES
, EVEN THEY HAVE THE LATEST INNOVATIVE INSTRUMENTS OR TOOLS.

SO
, AS PER MY VIEW, PROVIDING INFORMATION TO THE PUBLIC ABOUT THE CONSEQUENCES OF SURGING THE ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEM COULD ABLE TO
HELP
TO
GET
RID OF THIS DETRIMENTAL CONDITION OF THE
PLANATE
.
FOR INSTANCE
, AS PER THE UK WHETHER DATA, THERE HAS BEEN 40% DECREASE IN THE SPREADING THE TRASH
THAT IS
AAFTECTING
THE
SURROUNDING
AND WEATHER OWING TO THE FACT THAT THE UK CIVILIANS HAS A
ENOUGH
KNOWLEDGE AND UNDERSTANDING OF THE TAKING CARE OF THEIR ENVIRONMENT.

IN CONCLUSION
,
SURROUNDING
MENACE
INDEED
SOLVE IF WE ALL WORK
TIGAETHER
AS A TEAM. PERHAPS, THIS ACTION REQUIRES THE MAIN SUPPORT FROM THE REGIME TO
SOREAD
THE AWARENESS AROUND THE CIVILIANS.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Environmental problems are serious in many countries. It means that the only possible way to protect the environment is at an international level. v. 7

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
8
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Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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