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Environmental problems are becoming a global issue. Environmental problems are counter-challenging the quality of life people enjoy in modern advanced societies. Do you think that environmental problems will produce better results if it is addressed globally or it should be addressed by individual countries?

Environmental problems are becoming a global issue. Environmental problems are counter-challenging the quality of life people enjoy in modern advanced societies. Do you think that environmental problems will produce better results if it is addressed globally or it should be addressed by individual countries? 9dor
Currently, environmental problems are a worrying problem for the whole world. The consequences caused by the environment have a great influence on the lives of people. While some would argue that this should be tackled as each country will have a stronger impact, I do believe that global initiatives will do better. At first, some environmental problems initially only occurred in a certain region or country but if they could not be solved, the expansion of industrialization and several other reasons would cause it to spread to a neighborhood number. therefore, From a national problem, it becomes a world problem. for instance, the Amazon wildfire which not only influences the environment in Brazil but also affects the environment of the world. The Amazon forest produces about 20% of the world's oxygen and is commonly referred to as the planet's lungs. If the Amazon is irreversibly damaged, it could begin to emit carbon - a major contributor to climate change, according to the World Wide Fund for Nature. Second, measures and initiatives are not only reviewed by international agencies before being applied but also supervised by excellent scientists and researchers throughout the process, under their direction and guidance, countries will take it more seriously, more effectively, and more easily. Last but not least, financial problems are also one of the reasons preventing many countries from taking solutions to overcome environmental problems. Gas emissions from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles lead to global warming. We can reduce these emissions by using alternative energy sources such as solar, wind, and water. However, many countries around the world still do not have enough economy to use these energy sources popular. therefore, assistance from countries with developed economies plays a huge role. The collaboration between Japan and men is also a good example of this. Although many policies have been issued to overcome environmental pollution problems, due to lack of budget and lack of human resources, these policies are not effectively implemented. In this context, Japan has supported and shared its experiences to help Vietnam overcome this difficulty. Climate change has caused the warmest decade in recorded history; the ozone layer continues to deteriorate; many animal species are at high risk of extinction; there are many harmful substances that threaten health in all living organisms, including humans; and other environmental issues that greatly affect the quality of life of people. I believe that countries all over the world working together to overcome these problems will bring greater efficiency
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,
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environmental
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are a worrying
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for the whole
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world
. The consequences caused by the environment have a great influence on the
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lives
of
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people
. While
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some
would argue that this should
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as each
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country
will have a stronger impact, I do believe that global initiatives will do better.

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first
,
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some
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environmental
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initially
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only
occurred in a certain region or
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country
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but
if they could not
be solved
, the expansion of industrialization and several other reasons would cause it to spread to a neighborhood number.
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therefore
, From a national
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problem
, it becomes a
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world
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problem
.
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for
instance, the Amazon wildfire which not
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only
influences the environment in Brazil
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but
also
affects the environment of the
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world
. The Amazon forest produces about 20% of the world's oxygen and is
commonly
referred to as the planet's lungs. If the Amazon is
irreversibly
damaged, it could
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begin
to emit carbon
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a major contributor to climate
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change
, according to the
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World
Wide Fund for Nature. Second, measures and initiatives are not
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only
reviewed by international agencies
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before
being applied
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but
also
supervised by excellent scientists and researchers throughout the process, under their direction and guidance,
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countries
will take it more
seriously
, more
effectively
, and more
easily
.

Last
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but
not least, financial
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problems
are
also
one of the reasons preventing
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many
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countries
from taking solutions to overcome
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environmental
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problems
. Gas emissions from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles lead to global warming. We can
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reduce
these emissions by using alternative energy sources such as solar, wind, and water.
However
,
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many
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countries
around the
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world
still
do not have
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enough
economy to
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use
these energy sources popular.
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therefore
, assistance from
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countries
with developed economies plays a huge role. The collaboration between Japan and
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men
is
also
a
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good
example of this. Although
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many
policies have
been issued
to overcome
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environmental
pollution
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problems
, due to lack of budget and lack of human resources, these policies are not
effectively
implemented. In this context, Japan has supported and shared its experiences to
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help
Vietnam overcome this difficulty.

Climate
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change
has caused the warmest decade in recorded history; the ozone layer continues to deteriorate;
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many
animal species are at high
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risk
of extinction; there are
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many
harmful substances that threaten health in all living organisms, including humans; and other
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environmental
issues that
greatly
affect the quality of life of
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people
. I believe that
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countries
all over the
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world
working together to overcome these
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problems
will bring greater
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efficiency
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IELTS essay Environmental problems are becoming a global issue. Environmental problems are counter-challenging the quality of life people enjoy in modern advanced societies. Do you think that environmental problems will produce better results if it is addressed globally or it should be addressed by individual countries?

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  American English
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