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Environmental problem are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is to address it at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Environmental problem are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is to address it at an international level. with this statement? GGeo
It is argued that environmental problems are massive and laborious for countries and people to handle individually and requires collective global intervention to tackle them. This essay disagrees with the argument completely as environmental problems can be approached from the grassroots. The essay will first look at how public awareness of environmental protection and intentional government intervention through environmental laws, sanctions and penalties can reduce degradation in the ecosystem. Firstly, public awareness of environmental protection through media campaigns and inclusion in the school curriculum can educate the populace about the dangers of polluting the environment. Many citizens are not aware of the impact of their actions on the environment. For instance, the recent social media wave on global warming in America and most of Europe has had a behavioural impact on many people and have changed the way a lot of them go about their daily activities, putting environmental protection at the forefront. Additionally, the government in each country can be more intentional about preserving the environment by creating localised environmental laws. These laws should include sanctions and penalties for erring individuals, thereby discouraging hostile behaviours. For example, the environmental law that banned gas flaring in Nigeria has resulted in gas companies' multi-million dollar investment in gas processing thereby reducing gas pollution. In conclusion, the dissemination of important information about environmental protection to the public and the conscious effort of government agencies to establish functional laws will go a long way in solving many environmental issues we have today. As the popular saying charity begins at home. Similarly, If each country tackles this issue locally, the aggregated result will be unprecedented.
It
is argued
that
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environmental
problems are massive and laborious for countries and
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people
to handle
individually
and requires collective global intervention to tackle them. This essay disagrees with the argument completely as
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environmental
problems can
be approached
from the grassroots. The essay will
first
look at how public awareness of
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environmental
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protection
and intentional
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government
intervention through
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environmental
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laws
, sanctions and penalties can
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reduce
degradation in the ecosystem.

Firstly
, public awareness of
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environmental
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protection
through media campaigns and inclusion in the school curriculum can educate the populace about the
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dangers
of polluting the environment.
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Many
citizens are not aware of the impact of their actions on the environment.
For instance
, the recent social media wave on global warming in America and most of Europe has had a
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behavioural
impact on
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many
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people
and have
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changed
the way
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a lot of
them go about their daily activities, putting
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environmental
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protection
at the forefront.

Additionally
, the
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government
in each country can be more intentional about preserving the environment by creating
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localised
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environmental
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laws
. These
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laws
should include sanctions and penalties for erring individuals, thereby discouraging hostile
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behaviours
.
For example
, the
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environmental
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law
that banned
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gas
flaring in Nigeria has resulted in
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gas
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companies
' multi-million dollar investment in
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gas
processing thereby reducing
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gas
pollution.

In conclusion
, the dissemination of
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important
information about
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environmental
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protection
to the public and the conscious effort of
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government
agencies to establish functional
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laws
will go a long way in solving
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many
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environmental
issues we have
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today
.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
the popular saying charity
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begins
at home.
Similarly
, If each country tackles this issue
locally
, the aggregated result will
be unprecedented
.
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IELTS essay Environmental problem are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is to address it at an international level. with this statement?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
271 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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