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Environmental issues are too difficult to be solved by individuals An international effort is needed to protect the environment To what extent do you agree or disagree

Environmental issues are too difficult to be solved by individuals An international effort is needed to protect the environment 15mP7
We, the humans beings, one of the most intellectual breeds made by nature, have never served as its obedient pupils. Instead, we have always created one issue or another to the valuable setup arranged by God. It is high time now to understand that our alterations with environment have to be thwarted and we need to take some concerete measures in order to maintain harmony with Mother Nature. Both, the natural catastrophes such as volcanic eruptions and tsunamis as well as human activities, have responsible for the existing detrimental shape of our environment. Governments, all around the world, have become conscious about waning conditions of our environment; they have started taking some strong steps in order to redeem our relationship with our environment. Governments have initiated many consolidated awareness programmes for people; what is more, programmes such as tree plantations and go green seminars etc have also been implemented. Irrespective of all the above mentioned endeavours, botching up of environment has not subside. Instead, it has reached to soaring height. The NGOs all around the world along with environment protection bodies, suggest that, these rectifications Are needed to be implemented through a ubiquitously acknowledge forum. For example dissent in many countries, including India, USA, UK, recently made for designing a global strategy to resolve the issue of global warming, which has started showing its positivity, as most of these countries have started considering the issue seriously. Thus it can be asserted that more such global efforts would yield prolific results. It has to be understood by every individual that environmental issues are as bad a problem as any other Indigenous problem that one may have, the purview of this environmental issue is so high that, it needs a cumulative global ado to get resolved. Many of us already know the deteriorating conditions of our environment. We even try to proffer for our concern through various farmers, but these farmers have yet only been able to generate a trivial impact to resuscitate environment. It has to be understood that organisations like UNO, who have muscle and a voice to construct a global platform, should reshuffle their priority is to keep environmental concern at top. To pen down, it is true that individuals in past have ignited many revolution, but those revolution, unlike the current predicament, where fought against of foe. Here, we need to fight our own comforts and heedlessness, an individual have rarely been able to overcome their own selfish setups. In order to achieve any noteworthy swivel to environmental issues, global and ever with collective collaterals is needed. A global forum should design some austere regulations even if some individual benefits are compromised.
We, the
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humans beings
, one of the most intellectual breeds made by nature, have never served as its obedient pupils.
Instead
, we have always created one
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issue
or another to the valuable setup arranged by God. It is high time
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now
to understand that our alterations with
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environment
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have to
be
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thwarted and
we need to take
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some
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concerete
measures in order to maintain harmony with Mother Nature.

Both, the natural catastrophes such as volcanic eruptions and tsunamis
as well
as human activities, have responsible for the existing detrimental shape of our
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environment
.
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Governments
, all around the world, have become conscious about waning conditions of our
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environment
; they have
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started
taking
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some
strong steps in order to redeem our relationship with our
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environment
.
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Governments
have initiated
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many
consolidated awareness
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programmes
for
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people
;
what is more
,
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programmes
such as tree plantations and go green seminars etc have
also
been implemented
. Irrespective of all the above mentioned
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endeavours
, botching up of
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environment
has not
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subside
.
Instead
, it has reached to soaring height. The NGOs all around the world along with
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environment
protection bodies, suggest that, these rectifications
Are needed
to
be implemented
through
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a
ubiquitously
acknowledge forum.
For example
dissent in
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many
countries, including India, USA, UK, recently made for designing a
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global
strategy to resolve the
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issue
of
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global
warming, which has
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started
showing its positivity, as most of these countries have
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started
considering the
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issue
seriously
.
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Thus
it can
be asserted
that more such
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global
efforts would yield prolific results.

It
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has to
be understood
by every
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individual
that
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environmental
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issues
are as
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bad
a problem as any other Indigenous problem that one may have, the purview of this
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environmental
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issue
is
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so
high that, it needs a cumulative
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global
ado to
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get
resolved.
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Many
of us already know the deteriorating conditions of our
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environment
. We even try to proffer for our concern through various farmers,
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but
these farmers have
yet
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only
been able to generate a trivial impact to resuscitate
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environment
. It
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has to
be understood
that
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organisations
like UNO, who have muscle and a voice to construct a
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global
platform, should reshuffle their priority is to
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keep
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environmental
concern at top.

To pen down, it is true that
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individuals
in past have ignited
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many revolution
,
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but
Did you mean "this revolution" or "those revolutions"?
those revolution
, unlike the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
predicament, where fought against of foe. Here, we need to fight our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
comforts and heedlessness, an
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individual
have rarely been able to overcome their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
selfish setups. In order to achieve any noteworthy swivel to
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environmental
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issues
,
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global
and ever with collective collaterals
is needed
. A
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global
forum should design
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some
austere regulations even if
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some
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individual
benefits
are compromised
.
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IELTS essay Environmental issues are too difficult to be solved by individuals An international effort is needed to protect the environment

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
444 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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