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Environment problems are rise nowadays.what are the causes and possibly solution for it?

Environment problems are rise nowadays. what are the causes and possibly solution for it? 70NP3
In this concurrent world, it is true that government is doing their best for mitigates various global problem although its rise day by day. This essay will discuss the cause behind its and elaborate possible tackle to reduce atmospheric issues. To commence with, the top-notch concrete problem is air pollution which increase rapidly deu to not only developing more industrial area but also unwanted use of vehicles. Another issue which haulse me to patron that nowaday chemical industries is pouring chemical waste in water which increase more water pollution. Last but not least people like to luxurious lifestyle it means they need more land place for living therefore, they destroyed forest which most important things for maintaining environment. For example, a number of people want to live in house instead of flat as a result it require extra land. The solution are not simple, if the ministry spread awareness about the effect of the global warming on people consequently, it may reduce. In addition, individuals should use electrical vehicles or cycle which help to decline atmospheric problem related to carbon dioxide. Furthermore due to the overpopulation, government cannot reduce the cut-down of tree for building new home but authority may grow three both side of the road and also people grow tree plants at home it may assist to mitigate environmental problem. In recapitulation, I reiterate that there are various environment issue rise every day which may be reduced by the help of government and all community to planting more trees and using a eco-friendly vehicles.
In this concurrent world, it is true that
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government
is doing their best for mitigates various global problem although its rise day by day. This essay will discuss the cause behind its and elaborate possible tackle to
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reduce
atmospheric issues.

To commence with, the top-notch concrete problem is air pollution which increase
rapidly
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deu
to not
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only
developing more industrial area
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but
also
unwanted
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use
of vehicles. Another issue which
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haulse
me to patron that
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nowaday
chemical industries is pouring chemical waste in water which increase more water pollution. Last
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but
not
A determiner is probably missing here: "the least".
least
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people
like to luxurious lifestyle it means they need more land place for living
therefore
, they
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destroyed
forest which most
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important
things for maintaining environment.
For example
, a number of
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people
want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in
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house
instead
of flat
as a result
it
Did you mean "requires"?
require
extra land.

The solution are not simple, if the ministry spread awareness about the effect of the global warming on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
consequently
, it may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
.
In addition
, individuals should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
electrical vehicles or cycle which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to decline atmospheric problem related to carbon dioxide.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Furthermore
due to the overpopulation,
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government
cannot
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cut
-down of tree for building new home
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
authority may grow three both side of the road and
also
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
grow tree plants at home it may assist to mitigate environmental problem.

In recapitulation, I reiterate that there are various environment issue rise every day which may be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
and all community to planting more trees and using
Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
a
eco-friendly
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "vehicle"?
vehicles
.

IELTS essay Environment problems are rise nowadays. what are the causes and possibly solution for it?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
6.0
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