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energy source generation

energy source generation p11Ea
To begin with, coal is the major contributor on energy genration in 1980 to New Zealand with dominating 56 units out of 127 followed by natural gas and hyro each sharing 30 units and Petroleum with the least contribution of 11 units. Coal continued to dominate the energy source and captured around 75% of total electricity by 2010. Hydro had a slight increase and contributed for around 24% and natural gas and petroleum reported to provide 2 units each and nearly had no effect on the generation.
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in 1980 to New Zealand with dominating 56
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out of 127 followed by natural gas and
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each sharing 30
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and Petroleum with the least contribution of 11
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. Coal continued to dominate the energy source and captured around 75% of total electricity by 2010. Hydro had a slight increase and contributed for around 24% and natural gas and petroleum
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IELTS essay energy source generation

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
87 words
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