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Employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005

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After 10 years, the employment rate, both for woman and men, increased and the highest employment rate for men could be observed in Iceland (82%) and lowest in Australia (69%). Similarly, the highest women employment rate was in Switzerland (68%) and lowest in Australia (38%). Though the percentage of women employment increased in 2005, men were still ahead of women in employment sectors in these six countries.
After 10 years, the
employment
rate, both for woman and
men
, increased and the highest
employment
rate for
men
could
be observed
in Iceland (82%) and lowest in Australia (69%).
Similarly
, the highest women
employment
rate was in Switzerland (68%) and lowest in Australia (38%). Though the percentage of women
employment
increased in 2005,
men
were
still
ahead of women in
employment
sectors in these six countries.
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IELTS essay Employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005

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