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The main reasons why I haven't been seemed

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It's been a while that I haven't written anything. The reason is that I wasn't in my mood. There were numerous causes for not writing something. I have received several reject letters from various companies. First, Deloitte sent me an email that I haven't been selected for the test stage, and EY has sent me the test to complete. For your information, both are audit and consulting companies. I have completed the test, and honestly, I haven't done any of them, my groupmate gave me a hand to do that. Even though I got some help I couldn't pass this stage. Second reason I haven't written anything was about another failure. I got an interview that was a part-time job, and as long as I have selected, I would be able to instruct children about communication and public speaking. And guess why? I failed in an interview stage. Third and last failure was important to me. You know how I had worked a lot on my essays to apply for the UGRAD Student Exchange Program. After a long time, they sent me an email that, I couldn't pass the first step to get an interview. Thus, I didn't want to write anything. However, I hope there will be new chances for me to learn novel things in my life.
It's been a while that I
haven't
written anything. The reason is that I wasn't in my mood. There were numerous causes for not writing something. I have received several reject letters from various
companies
.
First
, Deloitte
sent me an email
that I
haven't
been selected
for the
test
stage, and
EY
has
sent
me the
test
to complete. For your information, both are audit and consulting
companies
. I have completed the
test
, and
honestly
, I
haven't
done any of them, my
groupmate
gave me a hand to do that.
Even though
I
got
some
help
I couldn't pass this stage.

Second reason I
haven't
written anything was about another failure. I
got
an interview that was a part-time job, and as long as I have selected, I would be able to instruct children about communication and public speaking. And guess why? I failed in an interview stage.

Third and last failure was
important
to me. You know how I had worked a lot on my essays to apply for the
UGRAD
Student Exchange Program. After a long time, they
sent me an email
that, I couldn't pass the
first
step to
get
an interview.
Thus
, I didn't want to write anything.
However
, I hope there will be new chances for me to learn novel things in my life.
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IELTS essay The main reasons why I haven't been seemed

Essay
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3 paragraphs
219 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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