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Electricity production process

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There is a process given here about producing electricity from geothermal energy. The geothermal power plant shows the process from cold water to final production. While analyzing the manufacturing steps, it begins with the cold water injection to the plant. The cold water pumped down to the 4. 5 km long way. It goes staright to the hot rocks that is called geothermal zone. Two types of wall is being used to the full process named the injection well and the production well. Through the production well, hot water pumped up to the consender. Those were the activities of the lower portion. The upper side work in a different way as it is connected with turbine and genarator. Turbine provides electricity to the generator and finally the electricity is produced. The overall system is divided into five important process. From the last stage, we get the power for our daily usage.
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here about producing electricity from geothermal energy. The geothermal power plant
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shows
the
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from
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cold
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water
to final production.

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begins
with the
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cold
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water
injection to the plant. The
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cold
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water
pumped down to the 4. 5 km long way. It goes
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staright
to the hot rocks that
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geothermal zone. Two types of wall is being
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used
to the full
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process
named the injection well and the production well. Through the production well, hot
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water
pumped up to the
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consender
. Those were the activities of the lower portion.

The upper side work in a
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different
way as it
is connected
with turbine and
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genarator
. Turbine provides electricity to the generator and
finally
the electricity
is produced
. The
overall
system
is divided
into five
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important
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process
. From the last stage, we
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get
the power for our daily usage.
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IELTS essay Electricity production process

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
151 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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