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3. It is clear that without significant guidance from teachers and parents, most students do not make well-informed decisions about which degree to choose.

3. It is clear that without significant guidance from teachers and parents, most students do not make well-informed decisions about which degree to choose. nx7J2
Choosing the best higher education institution is one of the most important decisions a student will make in their life when graduating from school. Therefore, it is up to parents and teachers to give specific instructions to their offspring. Advice and guidance should not be generic; rather, they should be tailored to the individual. It should be based on a student's distinct personality, interests, and abilities. This is not an easy process, but the earlier a student is encouraged to consider their higher education options, the better.
Choosing the best higher education institution is one of the most
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important
decisions a student will
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make
in their life when graduating from school.
Therefore
, it is up to parents and teachers to give specific instructions to their offspring. Advice and guidance should not be generic;
rather
, they should
be tailored
to the individual. It should
be based
on a student's distinct personality, interests, and abilities. This is not an easy process,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
the earlier a student
is encouraged
to consider their higher education options, the better.

IELTS essay 3. It is clear that without significant guidance from teachers and parents, most students do not make well-informed decisions about which degree to choose.

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