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Individuals have a responsibility to reduce their effect on climate change. This means that each person can make choices every day to limit this effect. For example, every day people drive to work, even though there are other ways of getting there. They could take the bus or ride a bicycle to work instead, both of which can limit the effects of climate change. As you can see, every day offers choices for people to limit the effects of climate change.

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reduce
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