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effort versus luck to succeed

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Individuals have a responsibility to reduce their effect on climate change. This means that each person can make choices every day to limit this effect. For example, every day people drive to work, even though there are other ways of getting there. They could take the bus or ride a bicycle to work instead, both of which can limit the effects of climate change. As you can see, every day offers choices for people to limit the effects of climate change.
Individuals have a responsibility to
reduce
their
effect
on climate
change
. This means that each person can
make
choices every day to limit this
effect
.
For example
, every day
people
drive to work,
even though
there are other ways of getting there. They could take the bus or ride a bicycle to work
instead
, both of which can limit the effects of climate
change
. As you can
see
, every day offers choices for
people
to limit the effects of climate
change
.
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IELTS essay effort versus luck to succeed

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
81 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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