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effects of co-education on the world and say your view about it.

effects of co-education on the world and say your view about it. RAlk
Everything has two sides as in this case. Co-education is a process in which boys and girls learn in a same institute and can interact with each other. They are free to choose what is good and suitable for their nature.                                                                                                   It is clear from the new research done by AST, students learn more when different genders come together under the same roof. They show enthusiasm and feel comfortable whilst in a co-education institute. Students can get more chance to improve their confidence and mental strength. They are free to share their ideas and feel better, when spend time in such places. They can mix up themselves with various cultures and may they move in a right and easier path. Especially, girls can crack a wall built by the society and other sources. Moreover, Islam gives the equal right whether the man or woman, but there are some restrictions regarding different aspects.                                                                                                            On the other hand, it carries some hazards regards to the Islamic values and the commands of ALLAH. Co-education is clearly against the words of ALLAH, and it is continuously spreading all over the world. It becomes famous like a trend, but it has destroyed moral values of various societies. People are loosing respect and care because their pupils try to survive in an atmosphere where no one is ready to take responsibility.                                                                                                                   All in all, parents feel fear, and they are not satisfied with the co-educational rules and limitations. In my view, I would like to argue that if governments have sufficient budgets, they should make separate institutes for both genders.
Everything has two sides as
in this case
. Co-education is a process in which boys and girls learn in a same institute and can interact with each other. They are free to choose what is
good
and suitable for their nature.
                                                                                                 
It is
clear
from the new research done by AST, students learn more when
different
genders
come
together under the same roof. They
show
enthusiasm and feel comfortable whilst in a co-education institute. Students can
get
more chance to
improve
their confidence and mental strength. They are free to share their
ideas
and feel better, when spend time in such places. They can mix up themselves with various cultures and may they
move
in a right and easier path.
Especially
, girls can crack a wall built by the society and other sources.
Moreover
, Islam gives the equal right whether the
man
or woman,
but
there are
some
restrictions regarding
different
aspects.
                                                                                                           
On the other hand
, it carries
some
hazards regards to the Islamic values and the commands of ALLAH. Co-education is
clearly
against the words of ALLAH, and it is
continuously
spreading all over the world. It becomes
famous
like a trend,
but
it has
destroyed
moral values of various societies.
People
are loosing respect and care
because
their pupils try to survive in an atmosphere where no one is ready to take responsibility.
                                                                                                                 
All in all, parents feel fear, and they are not satisfied with the co-educational
rules
and limitations. In my view, I would like to argue that if
governments
have sufficient budgets, they should
make
separate institutes for both genders.
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IELTS essay effects of co-education on the world and say your view about it.

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