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Gold: Production and Advantages

Gold: Production and Advantages oWp9
Gold is a bright chemical element in slightly reddish yellow colour. It is a precious element used for making jewellery. It is also used for medical treatments and also used in food. It is a rare element and is used throughout the world as money. Mining methods for gold is similar to other metals. Gold is so valuable that its discovery is called as Gold rush. Gold extraction is most economical in large, easily mined deposits. The consumption of gold produced across the world is used in jewellery, industries and investments. Production of gold results in hazardous pollution. Pure metallic gold is non toxic and is widely used across the world in different forms. Gold is a soft, dense, yellow metal. It is a chemical element and a precious metal. It has been used for many thousands of years by people all over the world. serves as the most vital element in international transaction and larger portion of gold is used in monetary systems. Gold occurs in India in quartz veins or reefs of quartz traversing igneous, sedimentary or metamorphic rocks. Gold is important because it is not only rare but has various advantages in different fields.
Gold is a bright chemical
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element
in
slightly
reddish yellow
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colour
. It is a precious
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element
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used
for making
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jewellery
. It is
also
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used
for medical treatments and
also
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used
in food.
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It
is a rare
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element
and is
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used
throughout the
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world
as money.

Mining methods for gold is similar to other metals. Gold is
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so
valuable that its discovery
is called
as Gold rush. Gold extraction is most economical in large,
easily
mined deposits. The consumption of gold produced across the
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world
is
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used
in
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jewellery
, industries and investments.

Production of gold results in hazardous pollution.

Pure metallic gold is
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non toxic
and is
widely
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used
across the
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world
in
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different
forms.

Gold is a soft, dense, yellow metal. It is a chemical
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element
and a precious metal. It has been
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used
for
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many
thousands of years by
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people
all over the
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world
.
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serves
as the most vital
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element
in international transaction and larger portion of gold is
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used
in monetary systems. Gold occurs in India in quartz veins or reefs of quartz traversing igneous, sedimentary or metamorphic rocks.

Gold is
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important
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because
it is not
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only
rare
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but
has various advantages in
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different
fields.
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IELTS essay Gold: Production and Advantages

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
197 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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