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Effects of Bad Parenting

Effects of Bad Parenting N8N22
It is considered that children are miniature versions of their parents. As a result, children's upbringing is essential in society. A well-educated kid will always be offered the best things, such as love and respect. . . . On the other side, poor parenting has a negative impact on children. Here are some of the consequences that parents may face if they do not effectively nurture their children. Children who are accommodated by a variety of factors likely to exhibit certain detrimental effects. Parents must entice those children with money, sacrifices, and so on, because it is obviously the parents' responsibility. They will grow outraged at their parents if they are unable to afford it. As a result, certain new unpleasant temperaments will arise, such as those who lose their temper easily, impatience, and dependence. If parents continue to ignore all of their children's positive efforts, their children will grow up assuming that they are losers, useless, and foolish. For illustration, they received nine points on the test due to a minor error. Parents, on the other hand, focus completely on that error and even not encourage their children to do their best the next time. They will give up everything and become introverted, refusing to express their true colors until they reach a certain point. On the other hand, they will act impulsively, which will lead to them being a horrible guy. We can observe that children raised in such a harsh environment would have some mental issues. When they are severely penalized for little acts. They would be terrified of their parents. They simply want to have their own lives and to find ways to get away from their parents. Parents may assume that "violence is simply a means of educating children" but it has a significant impact on children. Otherwise, their prejudice affects the children as well. For example, while LGBT is now considered normal, some parents may hold opposing views. As a result, the children will react in the same way that their parents did. Finally, people are responsible in their children's life. Their upbringing decides whether they become kind or bad. Every parent must discover a convenient method for their children to be educated. As a result, they can become both useful and adorable.
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that
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children
are miniature versions of their
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parents
. As a
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result
, children's upbringing is essential in society. A well-educated kid will always
be offered
the best things, such as
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love
and respect.
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On the other side, poor parenting has a
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negative
impact on
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children
. Here are
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some of the
consequences that
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parents
may face if they do not
effectively
nurture their children.

Children who
are accommodated
by a variety of factors likely to exhibit certain detrimental effects.
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Parents
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must
entice those
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children
with money, sacrifices, and
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on,
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because
it is
obviously
the parents' responsibility. They will grow outraged at their
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parents
if they are unable to afford it. As a
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result
, certain new unpleasant temperaments will arise, such as those who lose their temper
easily
, impatience, and dependence.

If
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parents
continue to
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ignore
all of their children's
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positive
efforts, their
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children
will grow up assuming that they are losers, useless, and foolish. For illustration, they received nine points on the
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test
due to a minor error.
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Parents
,
on the other hand
, focus completely on that error and even not encourage their
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children
to do their best the
next
time. They will give up everything and become introverted, refusing to express their true colors until they reach a certain point.
On the other hand
, they will act
impulsively
, which will lead to them being a horrible guy.

We can observe that
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children
raised in such a harsh environment would have
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some
mental issues. When they are
severely
penalized for
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little
acts. They would
be terrified
of their
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parents
. They
simply
want to have their
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own
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lives
and to find ways to
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get
away from their
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parents
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a means of educating children
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it has a significant impact on
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children
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Otherwise
, their prejudice affects the
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children
as well
.
For example
, while LGBT is
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now
considered normal,
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some
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parents
may hold opposing views. As a
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result
, the
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children
will react
in the same way
that their
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parents
did.

Finally
,
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people
are responsible in their children's life. Their upbringing decides whether they become kind or
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bad
. Every
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parent
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must
discover a convenient method for their
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children
to
be educated
. As a
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result
, they can become both useful and adorable.
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IELTS essay Effects of Bad Parenting

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
379 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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